The Dimension Portal at School

We found it under the statue at the front of the school. There was a big black dark hole with fiery swirls in the centre. I had no idea what was in there until I fell in one day at recess time. It was Friday the 13th, 2011 when I fell in and it was a black and white version of the world. BANG! I hit the floor in London 13 BC (Caleb, Age 8 to 12, 9/1/2008 7:55:06 PM) (edit) )

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Then a girl walked up to me and held out her hand I gladly took it and noticed she had cat ears and a tail "hi I'm amy" the girl said (aiko, Age 8 to 12, 21.08.2013 23:11:10) (edit)

THEIR WAS A BOY NAMED JASON AND HE WAS COOL (sean, Age 8 to 12, 16.10.2013 14:43:53) (edit)

ONE WAS A LITTLE NAME JAY HE WAS PLAY AND A GIRL PLAY A GAME (jashya, Age 1 to 4, 16.10.2013 14:45:34) (edit)

ONE WAS A LITTLE NAME JAY HE WAS PLAY AND A GIRL PLAY A GAME (jashya, Age 1 to 4, 16.10.2013 14:45:38) (edit)

I walked up to Amy. She asked me for my name, but I forgot because I hit my head on the floor of this strange white world. "Where am I?" She didn't answer. After 10mins, she finally did. "A world where your trapped forever." Her eyes glowed bright red. (Brianna, Age 8 to 12, 25.10.2013 09:54:27) (edit)

"Erm..." I was scared. I didn't know what to do. I felt like I was in a box. A box of nothing. A tear dropped down my eye. "???" It seemed like she was puzzled." Wait... Weren't you going to like. Kill me?" "Why would I?" (Brianna, Age 8 to 12, 25.10.2013 09:57:51) (edit)

"But... Your eyes....." I hollered. I felt dead already."My eyes always do that." I felt saved when she said that. "Although..." Oh, here comes the bad stuff. "Dark spirits encounter this world...." Dark spirits? I knew this place was peculiar. "But this world... It's like a non stopping box. (Brianna, Age 8 to 12, 25.10.2013 10:01:40) (edit)

Suddenly,- BANG! "Ow, hurt my head..." Someone else was here? "Hello? Hello? Anyone?" He spotted me. "Who are you?" " I'm from your school. "Huh, I don't remember you though..." she like somone est name jose (Brianna, Age 8 to 12, 07.11.2013 15:37:32) (edit)

Why did I ever fall into that portal!? I groaned. (Taryn, Age 8 to 12, 07.05.2016 17:28:12) (edit)

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