Layne and Nathan were walkin down a dirt road on the way home from school.A magpie came and swooped us So we grabbed some armour rocks so we were watchin our backs.Layne was on his knees when it swooped him the magpie misted. (Layne Baker, Age 8 to 12, 9/2/2008 2:52:06 AM) (edit) )

They were running under cover at the football oval. Layne's bag and scooter were out in the middle. Layne grabbed a big rock then ran to get his scooter and bag. (MissH, Adult, 06.12.2009 17:25:39) (edit)

he ran and got his bag and scooter and keep his rock in his hand and nathan grabed a rock and ran out with layne and they were lookin around at the aposite way. (nathan, Age 8 to 12, 19.10.2009 19:02:19) (edit)

they had sticks in there hands as well as stones in there hands. Suddenly the magpie was comeing layne had the stick and nathan had rocks.layne droped the stick and ran and left nathan and started laughing nathan was yelling out "layne come back now!!" (Layne, Age 8 to 12, 26.10.2009 18:23:54) (edit)

The magpie was focused on nathan layne was safe nathan was walking throwing rocks at the magpie layne came back and used his magical fire breathe (layne, Age 8 to 12, 26.10.2009 18:33:57) (edit)

then the maggpie pecked his eye balls out and jorja laughed her head off "hahahaha" (ljkdvbfd, Age 8 to 12, 26.10.2009 18:34:33) (edit)

then all of a sudden 587 magpies swarmed down on nathan and eat his flesh, then layne made them angry so layne was taken to a tall building and dropped layne to the ground then eaten dead (unknown, Age 1 to 4, 26.10.2009 18:35:36) (edit)

they got resserected again and got a 22 and tried to shoot the magpie but missed (bobert, Age 8 to 12, 26.10.2009 18:39:30) (edit)

they hit a pole instead (fred, Age 5 to 8, 26.10.2009 18:39:50) (edit)

then jorja said "ATTACK!" and the maggpies swooped down and killed nathen (jorja, Age 8 to 12, 26.10.2009 18:40:10) (edit)

and rebounded and hit the magpie then the babies came and started to swoop (Layne, Age 8 to 12, 26.10.2009 18:40:38) (edit)