He walked around every corridoor atleast twice now. Fustrated and feverish he was determind to find her, but three days without food, a broken wand, and counless buirsing one would be lost to fatality itself and its grim greetless face. He remembered the mear momments yet days before he basked in the glow of a wonderous young women he swore he shall foreveron and forevermore devoute himself to. He knew better to fall in love when Voldermort was wickedly about his buissnness, but those soft pool bule eyes and reddish long flowing locks weakened him. He was dazed with deprression leaning on the stone cold walls to support his staggering figure hearing a honey like tone sreaching in a narrow hall alerted all his sences at once. He dashed towards it, but suddenly felt a a sillowette surround him swallowing him whole. (Twilight22, Age 13 to 18, 8/19/2006 10:16:29 PM) (edit) )
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“huhhh?” harry looked around. “wha?” He sat up. He was in a green meadow with dandloins and little blue flowers peeping up through the soft blades of grass. “Where-Where am I?” a girl with thick brown locks ran up to him. “oh it’s the wizard! Help!!!” “What?” harry sat erect and confused. “what’s going on?” “Oh!” the girl plopped down beside him on the grass faintly. She looked slightly out of proportion, as if someone had sucked the color out of her and carelessly put it back on. Tears streamed down her face. “it’s-it’s T-Tamwyn…” she gasped through sobs. “we’ve come from a faraway land called Avalon, a bridge connecting heaven and earth, and we have been banished here because humanity was tipping Avalon’s fragile balance.” She wiped her eyes with her tunic and desperately tried to pull herself together. “Tamwyn tried to bring a wizard here to help us. It used such strain he is sick with fatige.” Harry’s eyes reeled back in his head trying to grasp this strange concept. But after all, after finding out he was a wizard hardly anything suprized him. “take me to him” he whispered patting the girls shoulder ever so gently. Releif shone in her eyes. She walked towards a group of people crowding around something. “the wizard…” some mumbled, “is it him?” others said. “what’s he wearing?” a child asked. Harry made his way to the center and pointed his wand at a boy who looked similar to his age. “Gortayannis Healiosis” he commanded. A spark of light escaped his wand and surged through the boy’s body. His eyelids fluttered, then opened, eyes black as coal. He looked in the direction of the girl. “elli………” “Oh tamwyn!!!!” she cryed leaping to him. They passionately kissed, tears running down their faces. Harry felt a sharp pang in his heart, remembering the girl who had so passionately kissed him in the Gryfindor commin room, so long ago. (storyruiner, Age 8 to 12, 27.10.2006 21:41:01) (edit)
"No... Hermione..we have been through this before...I'm sorry I preposed to Ginny." He uttered breathlessly clawing his way out of Hermiones arms. "But..I love you...HARRY If I CAN"t HAVE YOU I'LL- "I THOUGHT IF ONLY I COULD BE LIKE HER YOU WOULD WANT ME AND IT TURNS OUT YOUR WITH ANOTHER WOMEN!" Suddenly the passionate figure emerged into a creature so sinster and vile to the human eye- "I"LL KIll YOU!" Harry sprinted into the sparly spred landscape thinking it outlandishly odd to have encountered a certain creature-A Palmah in the eastern parts of a land he have became so known of. Meeting this shapeshifer who was rather fond of him was another story in itself. (Kikio, Age 13 to 18, 18.11.2006 17:57:24) (edit)
ignore the paragraph about harry and ginny!!!)Hermione tells him finally at her last year that she loves him harry also tells her the same thing she kissed him and he had joy weeping down his face!!!they lived happily ever after. (Christina, Age 13 to 18, 02.12.2006 15:29:09) (edit)
Then harry woke up from his nightmare. "I can't believe I dreamt about me and Hermione" He got up realizing that it was morning and went down to the common room. He saw the girl that he really wanted to spend the rest of his life with, Ginny. "Morning Harry," she said with a smile,"Sleep well?" "Yeah," he answered kissing her. He sat down on the squishy couch and put his arm around her. She put down what she was looking at and leaned into him. They sat there in front of the fire with the snow falling outside for a while. Then someone came in through the portrait hole. (h&gP1212, Age 13 to 18, 11.12.2006 16:11:32) (edit)
"Oh! It's Ron" Ginny exclaimed."But why is he so red in his face?" "Ron What happened to you?"Harry asked. "Yeah it happened harry. I don't know.....How it did... But it did!"Ron said dreamily."Ron are you alright?"Ginny shook him. "Perfectly even more when Hermoine kissed me. Harry felt a strange feeling in his stomach.A mixture of jealous and guilt. "She kissed me right on my cheek. Harry is it real?"He pinched in the stomach."Ron don.....It's paining". "Paining?Yeah it's real Oh! Harry will she go on in the same manner with me or will it break up?"Ron asked with eager. I really don't know Ron but.......... Just then Hermoine came inside the common room.Harry stomach it a somersault. (P.Padma Priya, Age 8 to 12, 28.12.2006 02:12:29) (edit)
Harry thought he was coming down with something. "Are you alright Harry? you look kind of pale," asked ginny. "My stomach kind of hurts," he said. "Well lay down for a bit," she said. He layed down with his head in her lap. Ginny looked down at him for a little bit stroking his hair and then looked up at Ron and Hermione remembering what was going on. "So I hear you kissed Ron, Hermione," she said with a smile. "Oh, well," she said and her face got red but not as bad as Ron's. Ginny was about to press on and Ron said, "lets go Hermione," and they left. Ginny continued stroking Harry's head and read him the headlines in the paper. Harry still felt sick but was very happy to be with Ginny. (HGPOTTER31253, Age 13 to 18, 08.01.2007 16:56:33) (edit)
Then Hermione burst through the portrait hole,"Ok yes I did! But I wanted to see with Harry if it would feel weird if we were boyfriend and girlfriend!" she exclaimed. "i would not want to make him feel uncomfortable." " I am ok with it as long as I am with Ginny." He said. But he was not Ok with it. If they had a relationship, would he feel fine. His day went by fast and in a blurr. When he went to bed he had the weirdest dream about him, Hermione and Voldemort..... (H+G, Age 8 to 12, 09.01.2007 16:04:29) (edit)
It was dark. It was cold. And he was back in the graveyard he was in on his fourth year. Hermione was there, too. "Hermione!" harry called with a feeling of sadness the fact he might die today and not even tell her about his true feelings. He herd a shout back,"Harry, come here" All of a sudden Voldmort appeared. He grabbed harry by the head and thrusted him to the grave of voldemort's father and thegrave moved its self so harry could choke. "Hermione, come here, defeat voldemort!" Hermione went there, but before she tried to defeat voldemort she kissed Harry right on the lips. The tingles Harry felt when this happened made himdrop from the clench of voldemorts fathers grave and shout "Avada Kadavara" and he killed voldemort. Thats when he woke up, dissapointed and sad because of the thought that it was only a dream...... (Hermiones gal, Age 8 to 12, 09.01.2007 20:42:47) (edit)
Then he felt bad. Wht if he had really defeated voldemort. What if Hermoine had really kissed him. "Harry I heard you say "Kiss me Hermoine"I didn't know u have a crush on her"Ron blijnke. Harry clapped his hand to his head. Now Ron has heard.nHe would tell Ginny and Hermoine. What will they think of him. (Luna Lovegood, Age 8 to 12, 15.01.2007 02:24:31) (edit)
Harry grudgingly walked into the portrait room with his head down. He didn't want Ginny or Ron to see him. Suddenly the clatter of glass filled the air. Ginny had dropped her pumkin juice, and standing over her whispering in her ear was Ron... (Minnie Mouse, Age 13 to 18, 20.01.2007 19:32:36) (edit)
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