Every morning at 9:00 A.M., Mr. Hudson, my next-door-neighbor, would go jogging. He was so punctual, neighbors auctully considered a time clock. That day when he didn't, I knew something was wrong... 9:01 rolled around, and he wasn't there. (Missy (Mellissa) , Age 8 to 12, 6/7/2005 3:52:49 PM) (edit) )
(Average Rating: 6, Votes: 14)
I went over to his small cottage and I noticed that his blue shed was open and he was in there. I said, "Hi...watcha doin'?" He replied, "I'm redecorating my shed!" (georgina vaughan, Age 8 to 12, 15.02.2010 16:01:22) (edit)
I asked, "Can I help?" "Yeah, OK, can you pass me that can full of snake's please. Thanks." After he haf finished it, that's when I remembred why did he need the snake's tails for? "Mr Hudson, why didn'y you go jogging this morning? You usually do." "I was ill." And he done a very fake cough, even I knew it was fake. "But usually you even go out when you're ill, and through rain, snow, blizzard, anything!" "Well, I just didn't today, OK!" he snapped at me. That's when I new something terrible was going on, and I slowly turned round to go home. I was going to say something to him before I went and turned around, and saw ... (aSHLEY ... AGE 13, Age 13 to 18, 03.08.2008 15:19:09) (edit)
Mr. Hudson pick up a LIVE king cobra just before it was going to strike me! "Thank you, thank you for saving my life Mr Hudson!" "No problem Buddy - we have to look out for each other when the garage comes alive." I said " What can I do to repay you?" Mr Hudson thought carefully "you could help me move this old chest." As we moved the chest away, the handle to a trapdoor appeared. (Nathan Hart, Age 8 to 12, 31.08.2008 20:14:30) (edit)
I grabbed the handle and pulled it open. I saw a big dark hallway the trapdoor dissapeared. Mr Hudson stood right next to me, and we saw something flickering. I wondered if it was a light but I was wrong. It was green, old and see through... (David O, Age 8 to 12, 15.10.2008 20:45:53) (edit)
theres a condom in my garage!!!!!!
USED..... (THE CONDOM, Adult, 04.04.2013 14:23:58) (edit)
The zobie leant torwards me i felt around for a weapon i felt something it was the shape of a triangle i grabbed. I stabbed the zombie with then i heard mr. Hudson yell "Ahhhhhhhhhhh" I stopped and thought then i threw the triangle with perfect accuracy and it killed the spider "Are you ok" said Buddy "Yes thank you Buddy,Whats that triangle"said Mr. Hudson "I don't know but i think were gonna find out
(ron, Adult, 19.10.2016 23:16:34) (edit)
Then suddenly a door appeared from the dark i looked at it and i saw where there should be a keyhole i saw a trianglehole "Pass me the triangle Mr. Hudson Said buddy Mr. Hudson replyed "Ok". I put the triangle in the hole and turned it the door opened. I looked inside it was a ultimate dimension... (Caleb S, Age 8 to 12, 05.09.2008 04:22:15) (edit)
When i was looking through i was thinking about the zombie then suddenly a zombie appeared in the ultimate demension. I closed the door and looked at mr. hudson i realsyed he had been bit. I asked him "Are you ok"Hudson replyed"its Infected". Then i opened the door and thought about a medical kit and instructions on how to treat spidar bits and opened the door. The kit appeared and the zombie disappeared. I walked in carefully and grabbed the kit and then ran out... (Caleb S, Age 8 to 12, 05.09.2008 04:31:11) (edit)
I started to treat Hudson with the instructions by my side i worked and worked but i treated him. Then with the door open i was wondering what time it was then bang a clock appeared. it said 9:05 and i thought that can't be right. Then Hudson said "the time in this garage is different every hours a minute every days a week"... (Caleb S, Age 8 to 12, 05.09.2008 04:45:59) (edit)
I said "We have to explore this place find a way out" Hudson nodded i opened the door i thought of a knife for protection some food and some water a torch 4 pairs of battries and a bag. I told Hudson "Let's go" Hudson nodded we left the door and started to explore...
To Be Continued (Caleb S, Age 8 to 12, 13.10.2008 19:02:29) (edit)
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