Revenge

(0) It was 4’o clock in the afternoon. Jack was studying for the mathematics test which was to be held tomorrow. He hated mathematics; after all he wanted to become a doctor. But he had to bring good marks because his parents were very strict. He would probably be grounded for a week if he failed (Kashif, Age 13 to 18, 10/13/2006 1:42:43 PM, Revenge)

(1) store i build called ''sweet sweet revenge buy one get one cost $100 even for a little tricker toy! PART 1 (NU-NU JASHYA NICKNAME, Age 8 to 12, 10/9/2013 3:01:29 PM, Revenge)

(2) THEN SOME ONE CAME IN TO THE STORE AND KABOOSH AND DED PERSON CAME IN AND KILLED EVERYONE.......PART 22222 (LANA, Age 8 to 12, 10/9/2013 3:07:33 PM, Revenge)

(3) His mom came and said what are doing in you sister's room he was so scared and he said I'I'm was going to see a movie he said o.k yes moma o.k but then jamie said get out of here said jack but he put the worm,s. (adrain, Age 8 to 12, 7/13/2007 1:23:03 PM, Revenge)

(4) So then he went to his room and said the war has bigan then he hered a big screm he started to smalll. (adrtain, Age 8 to 12, 7/16/2007 1:29:33 PM, Revenge)

(5) When he heard the big scream he was frightened. He went down stairs to see if anyone was home but there was no one there.He went back up to his room and layed down on his bed. he turned on his stomach and when he looked out the window he saw a head.To Be Contu ined (nyeisha, Age 8 to 12, 7/17/2007 12:10:52 PM, Revenge)

(6) then he stated to panece he went to her sisters room and saw she was crieng he said that he was so afriad that he did that and his mom came back from the market and brout some bacon for tommorow. (Adrian reveles, Age 8 to 12, 7/18/2007 12:08:32 PM, Revenge)

(7) and his stumick started to cramp and he admided the and he said mom i put worms in jamies bed in then his mom said your grounded (shelby williams, Age 5 to 8, 7/20/2007 12:21:07 PM, Revenge)

(8) and then he ran away from home. (Sara, Age 8 to 12, 9/14/2007 11:21:21 PM, Revenge)

(9) as he ran out the door the head started chasing him. he tried to get back in but the door was locked so he ran screaming with the head right behind him. (trent, Age 8 to 12, 9/23/2007 4:24:31 PM, Revenge)

(10) As being the bravest he truned around and had a one to one eye contect wth the head. as the head was very scary and jack was very scared still he maintain the corage and ask the head wat you want and y are u chasing me. as the head told jack that my name is anton and i belong to the planet astro mat and from there we have serched you to help us fight back our planet. and jack could not belive anton and run back inside the house from the back door and ley on his bed and close his eyes and told him self that its not real its just a dream.and went to sleep. as he got up in the morning to be ready for the math test he open his eyes and OH MY LORD he was not in his room he clean his eyes again and was sured that he was not on planet earth he was on planet astro mat. as he looked at the door to escape he saw the whole army of Flying heads coming his way. so jack screem so loud that all heads stops and stayed at there places thn anton step forword and aplogize to jack for bringing him to his planet and explan that thy really need jacks help as he is the only one who could help thm recue the king and get the planet back as thy only have a day left before the evil astro mats get thm. so at that moment jack couldent understand wat to do. and was evn thinking that its a dream and if not a dream i have to make a plan to go back home.so he agreed to help them out to recue there planet and told anton to arange a meething wth the evil king. and after having his lavish breakfast the evil king came to meet him and was very circastic wth a evil smile on his face. as jack was a very barve and confident boy he also stood there wth a smile on his face and ask the king for a deal. as the king told him if u answer all my question and challege my intellignce ill relse the king and gve the planet back to them. so jack asked the king for 3 days time, as the king was very confident about him self and was ready to take over the planet he thought wat the little boy can do. he laughed and agreed on it. so after the king left jack make a plan to start the next day 1st challenge so after the going to an idea came up in his mind and he called the evil and ask his if he is ready for the 1st challange as the king was over confident he agreed and said yes wats the task jack told him that i can run so fast that from nite i can run into the day. the king laughed and accepted the challege as jack was very smart he calculated the time so perfectly that he called the king 20 min before the sunrise as thy were all set for the 1st challege jack told the evil king to run 1st to 10 km. And if u mange to run into the day u will get the king and the planet.so the evil kinged agreed and run 1st and very fast but fails to make the daylite as it was jack turn jack runs in a meduim pace and as it was about time for the sunrise by the time he reached the 10km lite the sun came out and it was daylite and jack won the challege. as the astro mats celebated there victory and got there nice and humble king back and the planet toooo that they made a super flying ship for jack and give him the power to quonqre every skills like he was week in maths now after the power he can easliy achive everything. as he came back to planet earth and in his home it was only one nite. so went back to his bed and in the morning got ready for his maths test, after geting the result for that he was shocked as his parents were he got and A+ (beenish, Adult, 11/28/2007 3:31:58 AM, Revenge)

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