the Phoenixes cry

(0) harry was going 4 a walk round the grounds with ron and hermione when ron ssaid oh my god i forgot to feed pig 4 the last 2 days so ron leged it back to the castle harry and hermione continued to walk they got to hagrides and they saw a figer scury off harry said to hermione come on let's folow it. the thing when in to the forbiden forst harry and hermione were like 5 mins form the forist edge when voladmort apered and wrapped then in an invisable rope hahahahaha voldamort laughed and hermione was so good at doing spells now she did not need to say anything so she losend the ropes and the leged it but hermione triped and broke her ankle harry picked her up and stared to run when they got to the edge harry said if i don't see you ever age or i die i just wanna tell you the harry lay moin less on the floor and hermione said what is it you want to tell me but she realised what voldamort had done and weped over harry's boddy (mr love, Age 13 to 18, 9/5/2005 5:38:27 AM, Phoenixescry)

(1) Voldamort had just come upfrom behind hermione and as soon as hermoine relized he was behind her it was to late. voldamort had just yelled, "Imperio!" Hermione was put under the imperious curse. Voldamort had sent hermione to go and get dumbledore and have him come down so he could kill him. "Dumbldore you have to come quickly I think harry is dead!" Dumbledore and hermione went down to see harry. "Avadra Kadavera!" yelled voldamort. and there was hermione and dumble dore lying down on the floor next to harry. (Seth, Age 8 to 12, 12/8/2005 5:13:44 PM, Phoenixescry)

(2) suddenly a brite light shone around harry and hermoine they started to rise then hermoine feel to the ground and harrry 's green eyes opened and looked a t voldemort then he setleed down and said to voldamort you think it would be that easy i think you need to practece the a ball of fire apperde in his had and it got biggger and bigger then he through it at voldamort then thought it at voldamort (i shaged hermoine, Young Adult, 12/10/2005 8:06:22 AM, Phoenixescry)

(3) Voldemort was killed, or so Harry thought. He forgot that Voldemort had things called horcruxes. All of a sudden they heard a pheonix cry and they relized it was Fawkes. It meant that Dumbledore and Fawkes were dead. They had a funeral for Dumbledore and that was the last time they ever saw Prof. Albus Dumbledore. (Kristin Fisher the biggest Harry Potter fan in the world, Age 8 to 12, 12/13/2005 9:45:19 PM, Phoenixescry)

(4) Hermonie cryed at the funrel and so did Ron, but Harry tried to hold back the tears..atleast tried to. "I cant belive this hapend to him!" Hermonie cryed holding onto Harry. "I know" Harry added (i know..it stinks but oh well.) (Hermonie7605, Age 8 to 12, 12/14/2005 8:54:54 PM, Phoenixescry)

(5) After the funrel Ron , harry and Hermonie went back to the Grifendoor tower. Ron went to bed but Harry, and hermonie stayed up. Hermomie was still crying on th coach in the lobby. Harry stood by the fire , "this cant be happening!" Hermonie yelled. "But it is!"Harry explained (Hermonie7605, Age 8 to 12, 12/14/2005 8:59:04 PM, Phoenixescry)

(6) and you have to live with it harry said but i don't want it to happen she wailed back hermoine you were like me 2 years a go and now is a better time to tell you rather than later i think ....i think i love you he let out with a sigh hermoine stiffend what she wisperdi think i l...l...ove you.hermoine turn round slowly and looked at him and said say that to my face so i know you not lieing i think i love you he repeted and with that hermoine jumped on him kissing him with exetrem hunger... (i love hermoine harry romance, Young Adult, 12/17/2005 3:24:03 AM, Phoenixescry)

(7) "What are you two doing, you should be in bed." said albus dumbledore. "WHAT." said harry and hermione at the same time. "Proffesor Snape put a very powerful spell on me to bring me alive."said albus. "But you told me that there is no spell strong enough to bring someone back from the dead in my fourth year." said harry. "Of course there isn't a strong enough spell to bring someone alive." said hermione. Then all of a sudden dumbledore had just turned into voldamort. "Poly juice potion, a brillant thing that is." said voldamort. "AVADRA KEDAVERA!" (i love happy endings, Age 8 to 12, 12/17/2005 8:14:14 PM, Phoenixescry)

(8) Voldemort's spell headed straight for Hermione and Harry. The beam was a foot away from them when a flash of crimson red feathers blocked the two teens. The Pheonix bursted into flames as the "killing curse" hit the feathered body. "Fawkes!" Hermione whispered, finally realizing what creature saved them. It's tiny bald head poked up out of the ashes, small crystal orbs dropping from it's eyes. "Curse you, Pheonix!" Voldemort yelled at the hatchling sitting atop the red ashes. (The Homicidal Nny, Age 13 to 18, 12/18/2005 7:32:50 PM, Phoenixescry)

(9) That gave Harry and Hermione just enought time to recover from the shock. They both grabbed their wands and cried AVADA KEDAVRA!!! then Voldemort died and Harry and Hermione were happy... but then! Harry had the last Horcrux inside him and he turned into Voldemort! So Hermione knew that the only thing to do would be to kill Harry... so she did. But since Harry had tuned into Voldemort, she was really only killing Voldemort and after she killed him, then Harry came back to life. (muggle, Age 8 to 12, 1/13/2006 6:34:44 PM, Phoenixescry)

(10) harry slowly got up to his feet . hermione ran towards him and flung her arms round him . "oh harry you're alright" she cried hugging on to him . harry managed to pull himselve free from hermione " are you alright?" he asked hermione softly . hermione nodded . she helped harry to his feet " come on we better get back to the castle " suggested hermione and the two twelve year olds began walking towards the castle where they saw ron and ginny on the grounds waiting for them . (lauren, Age 13 to 18, 1/14/2006 2:42:28 PM, Phoenixescry)

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