One Lucky Dog

(0) One day a Black Lab named Midnight was on a walk with his owner Katlin Love. The next thing he knows Katlin was being forced into a big black truck!!! Midnight tries to help, he attacks the huge man but is kicked in the nose!! (Christi , Age 8 to 12, 4/24/2003 3:13:14 PM, One_Lucky_Dog )

(1) No matter,Midnight did not give up that easily.He stood with courage and growled.His teeth looked much sharper and bigger in size.The man's eyes widened and tried to kick Midnight's side."No!",Katlin Love screamed.The man made a move with his hand and hit her eye,giving her a black eye.Midnight could not take it anymore.He growled and just as he was about to bite the man's leg off,they guy ran off in his truck.Katlin was happy and hugged her black lab."Oh,Midnight!Thank you,you deserve a snack". Unfournately,this was only a prelude of things to come very soon. (Emily, Age 13 to 18, 8/28/2003 5:33:14 PM, One_Lucky_Dog )

(2) Midnight and Katlin were heading home. A white van, that appeared to be an ice cream truck slowly approached. Katlin and Midnight decided they deserved an ice cream cone. They headed for the van when suddenly a long net appeared from inside the van. Midnight was captured and Katlin yelled, "Don't take my dog. Please!!" The van continued to move away from Katlin as she ran to follow the vehicle. Katlin realized she must hurry home to tell her parents about Midnight and the other strange events that happened to her that day. (P.J., Age 8 to 12, 9/5/2003 3:17:13 PM, One_Lucky_Dog )

(3) Just then Midnight came flying back."Midnight you've been keeping a secret from me all long you have super powers"said Katlin in shock. (A.H. Your mystery person ask Jaz for my name, Age 8 to 12, 10/7/2003 10:06:26 PM, One_Lucky_Dog )

(4) good (whoo, Age 13 to 18, 11/17/2003 9:47:44 PM, One_Lucky_Dog )

(5) this dtory is brilliant thank you (etmond, Young Adult, 11/18/2003 4:05:21 AM, One_Lucky_Dog )

(6) this story is brilliant I relly like it (keirran, Age 13 to 18, 11/18/2003 4:06:13 AM, One_Lucky_Dog )

(7) Ummmm.. so not brilliant. But with a few more fixes, It's good. I like the paragraph where they get out to get icecream. It was very discriptive! (Kira, Age 8 to 12, 11/21/2003 9:13:38 AM, One_Lucky_Dog )

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(10) Midnight was groaning in pain. He knew that he had to save his master. The black truck was about to go. Midnight quickly ran to the truck and climb up from the back of the truck. (hui shan, Age 8 to 12, 1/5/2004 9:15:30 PM, One_Lucky_Dog )

(11) yeah! Me too.Let go and eat some thing.I am hungry. Can we go and eat now.So there went to dream cafe and order drink and food that they love to eat. as soon the food had came they grabbed all the food.later(20 mintues)they were bloated.oh i am so full (evon, Age 8 to 12, 1/5/2004 9:19:27 PM, One_Lucky_Dog )

(12) yeah! Me too.Let go and eat some thing.I am hungry. Can we go and eat now.So there went to dream cafe and order drink and food that they love to eat. as soon the food had came they grabbed all the food.later(20 mintues)they were bloated.oh i am so full (evon, Age 8 to 12, 1/5/2004 9:20:13 PM, One_Lucky_Dog )

(13) yeah! Me too.Let go and eat some thing.I am hungry. Can we go and eat now.So there went to dream cafe and order drink and food that they love to eat. as soon the food had came they grabbed all the food.later(20 mintues)they were bloated.oh i am so full (evon, Age 8 to 12, 1/5/2004 9:20:14 PM, One_Lucky_Dog )

(14) yeah! Me too.Let go and eat some thing.I am hungry. Can we go and eat now.So there went to dream cafe and order drink and food that they love to eat. as soon the food had came they grabbed all the food.later(20 mintues)they were bloated.oh i am so full (evon, Age 8 to 12, 1/5/2004 9:20:19 PM, One_Lucky_Dog )

(15) When he got onto the truck, Midnight was panting. (Esther, Age 8 to 12, 1/5/2004 9:23:01 PM, One_Lucky_Dog )

(16) The truck went to a deep forest. The truck stop at a deserted house and Midnight was hungry and exhausted. He had no idea where he was and his master. (huishi..., Age 8 to 12, 1/5/2004 9:23:36 PM, One_Lucky_Dog )

(17) The truck went to a deep forest. The truck stop at a deserted house and Midnight was hungry and exhausted. He had no idea where he was and his master. (huishi..., Age 8 to 12, 1/5/2004 9:23:40 PM, One_Lucky_Dog )

(18) He knew that his owner is in big trouble,he started running as fast as his leg can carry him and the the long journey begins here.... (Jonathan yeo, Age 13 to 18, 1/7/2004 6:09:53 AM, One_Lucky_Dog )

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