Mother Of Christ

(0) There was a sudden scream in the kitchen as tweleve year old Stacy Michell walked into her mothers closet. She hurried down the stairs and to the kitchen but it was to late her older sister was standing over her mother bloody body which was lying on the floor. The scream had come from her sister when she saw her mother with the butchers knife in her hand. "Your mothers dead now," Stacy thought, while feeling shock, anger, and fear all at the same time. "Now what?" her sister said "We call the police and tell them everything1" Stacy replied. (Spunky Gal 101, Age 13 to 18, 1/28/2003 8:14:39 PM, Mother_Of_Christ)

(1) stacy picked up the phone from her sisters wet had. it was wet cause she had been crying. after she dialed 911 she... (Spunky Gal 101, please dont mess up this story! i really worked hard!, Age 13 to 18, 2/13/2003 5:10:05 PM, Mother_Of_Christ)

(2) "hello police?"my name is stacy and my sister killed..my mum with a butcher knife"! (bethany l, Age 8 to 12, 2/18/2003 9:31:40 AM, Mother_Of_Christ)

(3) but the police men wernt on the phone. "HELLO?" Said stacy."The phones dead!" said Stacie. "Thats because that i cut the wire!" said the sister.HOW COULD YOU DO THAT? Said Stacie.Just then Stacie had a cold drift on the neck and turned around and saw Bloody mary."OH MY GOD!" said Stacie. "I wne in the bathroom,turned out the lights and said "bloody Mary,"bloody mary bloody mary!" said the sister. "but i did that a cuple hours ago!" said the sister.But Then Bloody Mary went into Stacies sister. "AND NOW IM GOING TO KILL YOU!" Said the sister.Stacie stepped back 3 steps.the sister held out the knife.KILL KILL KILL KILL! Said the sister.Stacie didn't know what to do untill.... (GORDO, Age 13 to 18, 2/18/2003 4:20:12 PM, Mother_Of_Christ)

(4) [for spunky gal 101} I wont mess it the story up! :) (Whitney., Age 13 to 18, 2/18/2003 4:21:32 PM, Mother_Of_Christ)

(5) Alrighty then (Brigid(impresive but you can do better), Age 13 to 18, 2/19/2003 6:13:43 PM, Mother_Of_Christ)

(6) [For whitney] thank you (Spunky Gal101, Age 13 to 18, 2/22/2003 12:52:15 PM, Mother_Of_Christ)

(7) please add to this story! (unknown, Age 13 to 18, 3/13/2003 5:50:45 PM, Mother_Of_Christ)

(8) we have no idea whats goin on,u guys hop from one thing to the next.we're at a loss (Morgain & Brigid, Age 13 to 18, 3/25/2003 5:27:02 PM, Mother_Of_Christ)

(9) listen i dont know where you came up w/ this story spunky gal but its really stupid so i guess no1 will add to it. plus IM LOST TO! (GCsBillyLover, Age 13 to 18, 6/29/2003 11:24:32 AM, Mother_Of_Christ)

(10) (I'll try to fix the story up a bit) A sudden voice echoed through the house. "Stacy, Wake up, Stacy, Please wake up! Oh, please say she's ok". Stacy frowned and suddenly relized that all of her surroundings were begining to fade into darkness. She looked desperatly for Bloody Mary but relized that she was gone. As well as her mothers dead body. "Whats going on?" Stacy asked backing into a wall, which vanished into thin air as her back touched it. Again she heard a distant voice. "Stacy, Please wake up! Please!!". "I know that voice" Stacie thought, "It's my sister!", Just then the whole place went pitch black and Stacy found herself alone. "Hello?" Stacy called running forward trying to find a exit. As she ran forward through the thick darkness, She saw a light shining not far from her. She ran towards it and the light got brighter and brighter. It in fact, got so bright that Stacy had to shield her eyes with her left hand, for it would have surely blinded her if she did not. A few shadows of faces and different colored lights appeared in the light. Stacy still walked on and then, She suddenly ended up in a room, which looked oddly like a hospital room. "What? Where am I?" Stacy said looking around her surroundings. She looked beside her and reconized her sister's strained face full of relief. "Thank goodness, your awake. You would'nt believe how many times I had to call you " her sister said. "What happened?" Stacy asked looking confused. "Well, Mother committed sucide in the kitchen and- and then when you saw her mangled body...you kind of....fainted. You went into this dream state and so I-I called the ambulence and the police" Her sister said suddenly bursting into tears. "W-What?" Stacy asked sitting up a little in the hospital bed. "You have been in a dream state for more than a week now. And-And I've been going to mother to. She is in the examining room right now. T-the docters and investigators are trying to figure out if sucide was really how she d-died.....They even asked me if I had killed her" her sister told her sobbing now onto Stacy's sheets. Stacy was in shock. She had really lost her mother. It was not part of the dream. "I thought it had not happened" Stacy whispered as her sister's sobs got louder. "W-what?" her sister stuttered. "I thought I dreamt mother's death. I thought it was all part of the dream" Stacy said staring into her sister's green fearful eyes. "But thats impossible, Mother d-died a week ago. You saw her body. You saw her with the knife in her hand. You saw it. I told you. Y-you fainted as soon as you saw her" Her sister said. "I know. But you would'nt want to believe that your mum had died...murdered to be exact-"Stacy broke off as a docter came rushing through the door. "Ah, your awake at last, Stacy. About time to" said the docter, taking out a clipboard and jotting down a few notes. The docter was a male and stood at least 6 feet tall. He had round, brown glasses which was plopped tightly on his nose and had brown hair with a few bits of grey in it. His eyes were a deep misy navy blue and he was dressed in a snowy white jacket with a name tag saying "Dr.A.Jones". "Oh sorry, I forgot to introduce myself. I'm Docter Albus Jones. I have been the one examining you over the past week" Docter Jones said extending his hand which Stacy shook. "Hi" Stacy said..... (There I hope this helps the story) (Ginger_Snapes, Age 13 to 18, 7/29/2003 9:15:45 PM, Mother_Of_Christ)

(11) Dr Albus bowed slightly and smiled,repeating Stacy's name. He turned towards the porch. Stacy could see his eyes going over the shape of the door, noting the broken lock and the cracked glass. Stacy peered pass him, and stared into the shabby yard. "I was wondering if you could give me some details about all of this," she said, waving her hand at the scene behind her, " mess and how we can make things right." Dr Albus, shook his head slowly. He rocked back on his heels and Stacy could see his brow furrow. Knowing that it was hard for him to address her when they had only just met, Stacy made an excuse and left the room. Dr albus watched her go and formed a plan. (ade, Adult, 12/23/2003 8:54:55 AM, Mother_Of_Christ)

(12) This plan was desperate and relied too much on legend, but it would have to go. The legend was that the Catholic Church was covering up a massive female boogeyman. It seems that the Virgin Mary became senile after a certain age and began to blame herself for the death of her Son. A story formulated in her head that she had betrayed him in some way as a child and that she needed to sacrifice herself to make things right. She then committed suicide, which condemned her to hell. From there, she became Bloody Mary, preying upon young victims in remorse over the fact that she forced her Son along in his mission and that she didn't want other children to grow up and have the same thing happen. All the evidence at the scene indicated that the mother had first been choked and then her breathing had been hindered by someone pinching her nose shut. The neck was broken and the knife had been jammed into her chest 39 times. There was no way the woman could do this to herself, so someone else had to be responsible. The older sister had mentioned that her mates had been over and tricked her into playing the old Bloody Mary game in the bathroom. After they left, the older sister heard sounds and found her mother dead in the kitchen. Based on this, Dr. Albus concluded that only one person could be responsible for the death -- and he was pretty sure it wasn't the mother or the children. (Up Jump the Story, Age 13 to 18, 2/19/2004 11:36:23 AM, Mother_Of_Christ)