Lily Evans' 1st day at Hogwarts

(0) Lily Evans was on the Hogwarts Express she was finding a seat "Excuse me" said Lily "may i sit here?" the boy sitting gladly said: 'sure' she sat down "i'm Lily Evens" she said "oh i'm Jamie Potter-- my real name is James but call me Jamie" Lily nodded the trolley lady came... "Candy?" she Asked "no" said Jamie "i'll take some!" said Lily... (Pansy Black, Age 13 to 18, 11/6/2002 12:06:45 AM, Lily_Evans_1st_Day)

(1) Lily asked James, " Why does everyone call you Jamie?" "To tell the truth, I don't know either. I rather not talk about it."" Oh...sorry. Want some candy?""Sure." (Alnn, Age 8 to 12, 11/9/2002 8:13:56 PM, Lily_Evans_1st_Day)

(2) Soon, they reached Hogwarts. After sorting, James and Lily were in Gryffindor. They were so happy. (Lilly, Age 8 to 12, 11/18/2002 3:20:17 AM, Lily_Evans_1st_Day)

(3) During the feast they both left because they had to go to the bathroom. They both got lost and accedently went into the third floor restricted section. They went behind a door they thought was a bathrrom but Fluffy was really behind the door. When they entered Fluffy bit James and blood started sputerring all over Lilly (I crack myself up, Age 8 to 12, 11/26/2002 9:07:03 PM, Lily_Evans_1st_Day)

(4) Lilly was now running to get help when fluffy bite her leg.Then threw her into a booksheif. (Robert.J.K, Age 8 to 12, 12/1/2002 8:50:26 AM, Lily_Evans_1st_Day)

(5) suddenly proffesor Dumbledore heard a loud crash and he ran up to the third floor and he found Lily and James lying on the cold , stone floor.he ran to get help and madam pomphrey said they would have to stay in the hospital wing for 2 weeks!...but James had a quidditch match in a wek!!! (hannah, Age 8 to 12, 12/14/2002 10:17:44 AM, Lily_Evans_1st_Day)

(6) suddenly proffesor Dumbledore heard a loud crash . He ran up to the third floor where he found Lily and James lying on the cold , stone floor.He ran to get help and madam pomphrey said they would have to stay in the hospital wing for 2 weeks!...but James had a quidditch match in a week!!! (hannah, Age 8 to 12, 12/14/2002 10:19:23 AM, Lily_Evans_1st_Day)

(7) suddenly proffesor Dumbledore heard a loud crash . He ran up to the third floor where he found Lily and James lying on the cold , stone floor.He ran to get help and madam pomphrey said they would have to stay in the hospital wing for 2 weeks!...but James had a quidditch match in a week!!! (hannah, Age 8 to 12, 12/14/2002 10:19:25 AM, Lily_Evans_1st_Day)

(8) it was time for the quidditch match every1 crowded onto the pitch and into the stands (boo, Age 13 to 18, 1/1/2003 10:30:27 AM, Lily_Evans_1st_Day)

(9) About an hou passed before peopl realied the griffindor players were not showing up.the peopl who realized this fact about 30min.ago,and had taken the smarter path and had fallen asleep.The not so subtle snoreres could be herd oer the whispers about what was taking so long.These people were greeted with looks of shocked disgust.the not so smart ones,for lack of anything better to do,argued among themselves.Everyone quited instantly when proffeser Mogonagol walked on the field and said for all to here,"Ther is a suspension that one of our players and a friend were deliberatly led into a dangerous situation.Grumbldor has therefore ordered everyone into the great hall.NOW" Once Mogonagol was gone mayhem broke loose. (Morgaine(Hiya honey...i still got it), Age 13 to 18, 1/29/2003 6:16:20 PM, Lily_Evans_1st_Day)

(10) From the center of the crowd a pair of green eyes watched all of this with a small smile. (Brigid(yea right), Age 13 to 18, 2/19/2003 6:09:25 PM, Lily_Evans_1st_Day)

(11) (now let's have some fun shall we)"Did you notice that Mogonagle said Grumbldore instead of Dumbldore?OH GOD WAS I ACTUALLY LISTENIG TO HER.WHAT'S HAPPEED TO ME,THIS GOES AGAINST ALL MY BELIEFS.I AM ASHAMED!!!" imidiatly after this declaration there was the sound of Fred Weasly bursting into great blubbering sobs.The person listening to this exchange over the mayhem that was the Quidetch feild,was apalled.The conversation continued."What the devil's the matter with you.Now stop your blubberin before someone confuses ya for me.And i'm shamed for life."George weasly promtly followed this annocment with the sound of a sharp striketo the face.The horrid sound of tears stoped.George's voice continued."That's right finish paniking like you were before,there's nothin to see here.HEY,now darlin i mean it,get back to what you were doing.And take that flea bitten mogrel with you.OH I DIDN't MEAN It YOUR A VERY PRETTY GIRL!!!" there was the sound of crying,but thankfully from a girl.He turned to inspect the 'mogrel' in question,and decided that George's descreption wasn't far off the mark at all.being invisible wasn't so bad since he got to hear everything that everyone said.Nearly Headless Nick moved closer to the two weasly's.Somthing strange was going on.And not just with the Weasly's.Every time somone acted aginst their nature they would end up intentionly hurt or just dissapeared.The oddest part was that no one noticed or seemed to care.This was the fourth time something like this had happened.Even the teachers were behaving differently.He listened to Fred's next words."Your right,this isn't like me.But somethings wrong George.Not just today either.You know that kind of fear ya get when everything in you goes cold.It's like that but i don't know what there is to be afraid of." George who was looking back at the girl,that in his opinion,even the dog species would be to ashamed to claim,that there was somthin to be afraid of right there.The girl looked like she would like to bite him.He hoped she didn't have rabbies or...it was the that his brothers words registered.And to his horror he went cold.And the cold came from fear paralizing in it's intensity,and it had nothin to do with the human beast.He looked at Fred and said through suddenly bloodless lips,"I hope that whatever it is making us feel like this is already here.Becouse if it isn't, then I don't want to think of what will happen when it does finally arrive" nick a bit unnerved by these words floated silently away.Another listener to these words sat quitly among the chous,tears rolling from their eyes even aa smile worked its way across their face.-~-(sorry IF the story's not going in the way you want it.You can change it if ya like i don't care) (Brigid, Age 13 to 18, 2/21/2003 7:00:33 PM, Lily_Evans_1st_Day)

(12) Remus Peter Sirius y james eran las personas mas divertidas y extrabagantes a la vez ya que cada cinco minutos uno de los cuatro o todos estaban metidos en lios (wt, Parent, 3/29/2003 1:14:38 PM, Lily_Evans_1st_Day)

(13) what? (Morgain, Age 8 to 12, 4/17/2003 4:57:24 PM, Lily_Evans_1st_Day)

(14) Don't be an idiot! This person is speaking another language! I'm guessing Spanish. (Jazzy D, Age 13 to 18, 8/14/2003 4:07:47 PM, Lily_Evans_1st_Day)

(15) What does paragraph eleven have to do with anything. (no offense)Isn't this story about what happens when james and Lily were in Hogwart's? Not during when Fred and George was in Hogwarts? (sophian, Age 8 to 12, 8/15/2003 5:15:14 PM, Lily_Evans_1st_Day)

(16) Okay! I found out what paragraph 12 says! And I was right! It was in Spanish! "Remus Peter Sirius and James was the amused and extrabagantes people but simultaneously since every five minutes one of four or all were put in lios." I don't really understand it myself but that's what came out of the translator. (Jazzy D, Age 8 to 12, 8/16/2003 6:43:30 AM, Lily_Evans_1st_Day)

(17) Seriously? But lets go on, shall we? Ingnore that paragraph? Since it doesn't make sense? (sophian, Age 8 to 12, 8/17/2003 9:40:42 AM, Lily_Evans_1st_Day)

(18) All in favour say Uh huh! Actually forget that and let's just continue the bloody story! (Jazzy D, Age 8 to 12, 8/18/2003 6:19:42 AM, Lily_Evans_1st_Day)

(19) Let's start from paragraph ten...Lily watched all of this with an amused expression in her eyes. At least I won't have to watch him, she thought wryly. Even though I did want to see Jasmine play. She couldn't stand the way he kept on showing off. She sighed and waited for Dumbledore to make his speech. "The Gryfindor Seeker and Keeper have been in the hospital wing because of a duel. We shall postpone the match to....Ah! Next Saturday. "Um, excuse me Professor." someone called out. "There are CATS (Class Acheivement TestS) next Saturday." "Thnk you, Alan, in that case, the match will be held tommorow." (Whoever read the fifth Harry Potter book type the letter Y after you sign your name.YYYYYY, Age 8 to 12, 8/18/2003 9:15:55 AM, Lily_Evans_1st_Day)

(20) Alright! Who wrote that? I demand to know!!! Who wrote that?!!!! (Jazzy D. Y, Age 8 to 12, 8/25/2003 3:59:44 PM, Lily_Evans_1st_Day)

(21) Its me, I forgot to sign my name. (sophian, Age 8 to 12, 8/27/2003 9:34:31 AM, Lily_Evans_1st_Day)

(22) Why d'ya write my name in there? Was that an accident or did you do that just to annoy me? Why d'ya write my name?!!! (Jazzy D, Age 8 to 12, 8/27/2003 3:13:49 PM, Lily_Evans_1st_Day)

(23) That was a complete accident. Really. I asked my sister for a letter, (for the girls name) and she said J. The first name that came to mind was yours. No lie! That's a rule I use for picking names randomly. sorry if i offended you. (sophian, Age 8 to 12, 8/28/2003 12:31:23 PM, Lily_Evans_1st_Day)

(24) Hmmm...well...I don't know wether that was ofensive or not to me...well...you are forgiven...but please, if your sister ever suggest the letter J for a name, DO NOT USE MY NAME! (Jazzy D, Age 8 to 12, 8/28/2003 1:23:59 PM, Lily_Evans_1st_Day)

(25) what a name anyway (rolling eyes) Sophian, did you ever see such trash as "Love Story 4 Jazzy D" in the new stories?? Seriously...by the way, Jazzy (if that is your name), you are already showing the symptoms of incurable PMS..quit being so paranoid, it makes you seem like a blonde bimbo. My compliments anyway. :) ((undisclosed), Age 13 to 18, 9/7/2003 9:36:29 AM, Lily_Evans_1st_Day)

(26) Ok, my friend ella wrote that story cos she was bored, and I'm not being paranoid! I just con't like my name being used in stories a lot (Only if the story means me and Lil' Fizz snogging under a tree!). That's all. Oh my real name is Jasmine. And I'm not blonde thank you very much! (Jazzy D, Age 8 to 12, 9/17/2003 3:38:35 PM, Lily_Evans_1st_Day)

(27) Then..WHAT ARE YOU?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (A.H., Age 8 to 12, 10/4/2003 2:40:00 PM, Lily_Evans_1st_Day)

(28) Brown hair is my colour k? It goes well with my eyes and school uniform! I accidently put permenent die on it. Not. But to clarify a few things. My name is Jasmine David, I am 12 and a half, I am not blonde, and I am not paranoid. If you want anymore info bout me cept my whereabouts than just ask. I'll answer as soon as possible. (Jazzy D, Age 8 to 12, 10/4/2003 5:16:22 PM, Lily_Evans_1st_Day)

(29) I already know that you like DB you have a dozen pets or around a dozen. (A.H.-and I know what kinda pets ya got., Age 8 to 12, 10/11/2003 10:11:47 AM, Lily_Evans_1st_Day)

(30) What's ur skin color? (?????????????, Age 8 to 12, 10/11/2003 8:43:31 PM, Lily_Evans_1st_Day)

(31) Err... have you ever met a phillipino person? That's sorta my colour, I'm just a tad bit lighter. (Jasmine, Age 8 to 12, 10/18/2003 1:37:51 PM, Lily_Evans_1st_Day)

(32) Hello Jasmine nice to see u!What's ur eeeee-mail address?Did u forget about me? (Shurley Mucke, Age 8 to 12, 10/18/2003 3:49:59 PM, Lily_Evans_1st_Day)

(33) Yall are nosy (Brigid, Age 13 to 18, 10/19/2003 10:20:49 AM, Lily_Evans_1st_Day)

(34) Mmmmm.........Nosy? (A, Age 8 to 12, 10/21/2003 4:16:50 PM, Lily_Evans_1st_Day)

(35) yes.No-sy.(nods head) yes you are (Brigid, Age 13 to 18, 10/21/2003 6:27:32 PM, Lily_Evans_1st_Day)

(36) Aaron, whem do you think you'll be able to die? Cos I've already hired a hitman! So shut the hell up and leave the nice people on this website alone! PLEASE! If you don't leave then I will! Bye! (Jasmine, Age 8 to 12, 10/22/2003 2:57:57 PM, Lily_Evans_1st_Day)

(37) Oooooookay!!Good bye!Have a nice trip!See you in heaven!ha! (A, Age 8 to 12, 10/22/2003 10:10:31 PM, Lily_Evans_1st_Day)

(38) Firstly, who said YOU were going to heaven? Second I'm staying. (Jasmine, Age 8 to 12, 11/9/2003 12:21:43 PM, Lily_Evans_1st_Day)

(39) *shoyru* hope it works.│ (♥ ♥ ♥ │ │ │ ƒ ƒ ƒ │ │ │ ♥ ♥ ♥, Age 8 to 12, 2/4/2004 8:49:56 PM, Lily_Evans_1st_Day)

(40) Such negativity in this room (Morgain, Age 13 to 18, 3/10/2004 9:34:05 PM, Lily_Evans_1st_Day)

(41) Oy...start again. (sophian (check out my stories on fanfiction, my penname is woodpecker), Age 8 to 12, 3/19/2004 6:05:12 PM, Lily_Evans_1st_Day)

(42) "I don't understand Italian" said a hoarse voice. "You mean French, no Spanish...Russian? "Well something wierd is definitly going on." said a green-eyed red-haired Christmas ornament...I mean girl. (R.E.B., Young Adult, 3/27/2004 2:42:14 PM, Lily_Evans_1st_Day)