Harry Potter and The Known Secret Of Magic

(0) David was a normal muggle. He had blonde hair and kept his head straight up through any challenge. He was short for his age. He was twelve, and despite how much he LOOKED bad, he had skipped a grade. He had lots of friends. He loved Kings cross train station more than any other local place. There was something he was desperate to find out about... "Hey, Davey," yelled the older tenth-grader bullies "Dare ya to go to Kings cross at night!" (KJH, Age 13 to 18, 10/4/2002 2:02:18 AM, KnownSecretOfMagic )

(1) He wasn't sure,but some how he said yah I will go.The tenth grade bullies started to laugh hard. (yah, Age 8 to 12, 10/21/2002 7:15:46 AM, KnownSecretOfMagic )

(2) Is their something I missed!?asked David. (Adriana Lopez, Age 13 to 18, 10/25/2002 4:23:34 PM, KnownSecretOfMagic )

(3) But the boys kept laughing harder and David just shrugged innocently."Okay,meet us here at Kings Cross at eight p.m. sharp.Got that kid?",Daniel said.David just nodded his head enthusiastically and walked along.Finally it was almost eight. (Winnie, Age 13 to 18, 10/25/2002 9:38:13 PM, KnownSecretOfMagic )

(4) DEAL ILL GO THEIR said david. (Adriana Lopez., Age 13 to 18, 10/27/2002 12:22:49 PM, KnownSecretOfMagic )

(5) David got to the Kings Cross but the 10th grade bullye werent their!Is this a prank?asked David (Adriana Lopez., Age 13 to 18, 10/27/2002 12:28:31 PM, KnownSecretOfMagic )

(6) Then, suddenly the bully pushed him into the wall between Platform 9 and 10. He wented right through it! "All aboard " the conductor yelled. " Now you don't want to miss the train to Hogwarts." said a strange woman. He was dragged on to the train. It was filled with children! He realized that the doors were shut! He couldn't get out! The train stsarted moving! (Maricela, Age 8 to 12, 11/6/2002 5:02:19 PM, KnownSecretOfMagic )

(7) That was the beggining of a very long adventurous journey to Hogwarts. One of the thousands of things that David didn't know was that he would soon become friends with Harry, Hermione, and Ron. (cerch, Age 8 to 12, 11/18/2002 8:55:13 PM, KnownSecretOfMagic )

(8) "Move it," grumbled a voice behind him. It was Malfoy. "Or would you like my friends to escort you out of the way?" Crabbe and Goyle grabbed David with a firm grip and dragged him across the floor and flung him into the train. He lay there for a while, speechless. Then he got up, rubbed one of the bruises he had just gotten and took a seat in the back of the train. Everyone stared at him like he was a lunatic. He even heard someone snicker the word, "muggle". A prefect came in with an inflamatory expression on his face. "What in heaven's name is going on in here?" That's when David knew he was in trouble. (KJH, Age 8 to 12, 11/23/2002 8:58:00 AM, KnownSecretOfMagic )

(9) (Sorry, I made a mistake that I can't really fix.) (KJH, Age 8 to 12, 11/24/2002 9:41:49 AM, KnownSecretOfMagic )

(10) "look",said the prefect. "i have been informed that somehow a muggle has got on the train, i just want to warn you to watch wat you say, as you may now muggles can be great harm to wizzards like us" david turned back round "what am i goin to do and wats all this about muggles and wizzards" he thought to himself (malfoys biggest fan, Age 13 to 18, 11/26/2002 3:48:57 PM, KnownSecretOfMagic )

(11) Then he saw people eating foods he had never seen before. There were also many unusalanimals on the train. What was realy bothed him the mostwas how he phased trough a wall. (Jacky, Age 8 to 12, 11/26/2002 8:37:15 PM, KnownSecretOfMagic )

(12) As he walked trough the carts there were the same unusal things. Then as he walked by Harry and the others Harry said "Hi" and then said "you must be knew here. (Jacky, Age 8 to 12, 11/26/2002 8:39:59 PM, KnownSecretOfMagic )

(13) David gulped. "Yes," He choked. "As a matter-of-fact...I am." There was an empty seat next to him, so he sat there, and slipped his backpack under the seat. He decided to find out what was going on. Hermione, who sat closest to the window, said, "We might as well be putting on our robes. I'll be leaving you two alone for a little while." Then, she got of the seat, and walked to the front of the cart, where she sat down. David's face turned pale. "Robes?" He uttered. "You've got to be kidding me!" Ron and Harry exchanged glances. "Well, sure!" Ron said. "Didn't you get the letter?" David turned his head so that Harry and Ron couldn't see the look on his face. (Jordan, Age 8 to 12, 12/30/2002 3:55:31 PM, KnownSecretOfMagic )

(14) David was a rather practical guy.He prided himself on this inportant fact.He liked to take things apart and see how they worked,and if he couldn't he really didn't want to be bothered with it.It ceased to make him interisted,no matter how shocking it was.He went through most of the train ride to Hogwarts in silence with no idea how much of a strain this shock would put on his belifs.Harry Ron & Hermione sensing this shook their heads in sympathy. (Brigid, Age 13 to 18, 2/21/2003 7:24:40 PM, KnownSecretOfMagic )

(15) "What's your name, kid?" said Ron and took a big red Berty-Bott's bean in his hand. David looked at him. "David," he said, "My name is David". Ron put the bean in his mouth. suddenley his face turn white and he started to choke. "I'm, sorry - wha... what happend? is it beacuse of me? i'm really sorry, I didn't mean to - " David said, looking at Ron. Ron swallowed the bean and smiled. "Don't worry, It's just a Berty-Bott's bean... I got a really ugly one this time... I think it's... oh, yac - sweaty socks flavour..." "Excuse me?" Said David. "What do you mean 'sweaty socks flavour'? what is it all about?" Harry and Ron looked at each other. Harry smiled. he turn to David and said: "Your'e a muggle, aren't you? so I think we need to tell you that..." (Guy Izikson, Age 13 to 18, 3/28/2003 8:22:16 AM, KnownSecretOfMagic )

(16) As the Hogwarts Express rumbled along.Closer and closer to Hogwarts,Daid refused to say anything after the boy named Harry and his two friends had told him all the rubbish about where the train was heading.David shook his head in annoyance and leaned back agaist his seat,resting his head against the compartment walls.All of a sudden the train gave a mighty lurch and seemed to swerve and buck like a thing possesed.The girl with the bushy brown hair and brown eyes,staggered over to the window holding on to things to stay on her feet.She looked out the window and David felt his stomach give a little twist of forbodding as her face went pale with fear."Oh God...I think u guys better look at this." David stayed in is seat as the two boys rushed to her.the red-heads eyes widened in shock."You don't see that everyday," And then "BLODDY HELL WHAT ARE THEY DOING OUT THERE!!!" David heaved a sigh as his curiosity won out over his fear.He walked to the window and imediatly wished he hadn't. (Brigid, Age 13 to 18, 4/27/2003 5:58:05 PM, KnownSecretOfMagic )

(17) Whin the train stop at Hogwarts Harry and the others got off ok but David had looked a little scared.After ever body got in and but every thing away they all (Serapio, Age 8 to 12, 4/28/2003 10:45:27 AM, KnownSecretOfMagic )

(18) David Got off and saw the giant Hagrid. Harry said "Hi , how are you."This year shoud be pleasin for ya.you'll get to play a real Quiditch team, Hogmids, there practicing." "Where is David." "There he is." said Ron. Playin Quidditch He has the quafall.David ziged and zaged hole team couldn't get him. 10 piont to, ahh, David. "Yah Go David yelled Herminnei. (David, Age 8 to 12, 4/28/2003 11:30:30 AM, KnownSecretOfMagic )

(19) oooohhhhh.(shakes a finger at harry)carlos is gonna get u.That at least counts for two strikes.(devolopes a sing song voice)I'm gonna tell (Brigid, Age 13 to 18, 5/1/2003 6:09:29 PM, KnownSecretOfMagic )

(20) Wait, wait...what the heck is going on? Let's step back a few steps. When David looked out the window, he saw a big castle-type building. "Wow," he gasped. "I've never seen a building like that!" Harry and Ron exchanged glances. "What's wrong?" David asked. They looked around, then whispered, "Muggles aren't supposed to be able to see-" Before Harry could finish, Hermione screamed, "Look at the tracks!" About 70 meters ahead, the tracks led into grass, and then into a lake. The building that the train pulled into was a mile or so to the left. David put his hands over his eyes. When he opened them, he could see a swirling vortex of all kinds of colors. The train and everyone in it were still there. "We're apparating!" Hermione cried. David fainted. (Jordan, Age 8 to 12, 5/5/2003 9:01:36 PM, KnownSecretOfMagic )

(21) "David," Someone said. "David, wake up!" It was Ron. He, Harry, Hermione, and a very large man were leaning over him. He sat up. He was in a small boat. "Thank god yer okay." The man said, gruffly. "One time, I 'ad a kid that trid apparatin' without knowin' 'ow! Vomited ev'rywhere 'e did!" David groaned. "That's Hagrid." Harry explained. "Might look a little scary, but is real nice." Hagrid smiled. "How d'ya do, David?" he laughed. "F-Fine." David sighed. In a few hours David fell asleep again. (Jordan, Age 8 to 12, 5/5/2003 9:11:45 PM, KnownSecretOfMagic )

(22) "David," Hermione said. "Wake up. We're here." The children made their way into the large castle, wher they sat down. "I realize that there are children to be sorted," a woman at the front said. "So let's begin." She put a hat onto a stool. "Griffyndors are daring, Slytherins are clever, Hufflepuffs are caring, Ravenclaws fall never." David looked around. "Where did that come from?" Harry laghed. "The Hat!" he explained. "Wattsworth, Henry!" The woman in the front called. A boy walked to her, sat on the stool, and put the hat on. David was taken by surprise when he heard the hat say, "RAVENCLAW!" Then the boy sat back down. "Mason, Yolanda!" The woman said, as a girl walked up to the hat. "HUFFLEPUFF!" It cried. She sat down. "Smith , David!" David's eyes opened wide with fright. He turned to Harry, who shrugged. He stood up and stumbled to the front. Then with shaky hands, he put the hat on. "Muggle!" The hat cried. People gasped. Some screamed. "But, wait! I can see lots of power...yes lots...very noble, very brave...yes, yes...Gryffindor!" David made his way slowly to where Harry and Ron were sitting. No one said a word to him all day. (Jordan, Age 8 to 12, 5/5/2003 9:37:51 PM, KnownSecretOfMagic )

(23) harry and ron were still his friends.anyway.suprisingly seamus had been expelled (since he began tormenting house elves) so little davy got his bed. the next day as davy woke up he noticed a dark figure with a wand pointing towards his neck. the man said 'muggle you will know the secret of magic... ill teach you.DIE!... (someguy, Age 13 to 18, 6/2/2003 4:08:49 PM, KnownSecretOfMagic )

(24) David grabbed the wand and threw it across the room. He grabbed the figure and forced it onto the ground. It was Malfoy. "What is happening here?!" screeched Percy. David paid no attention to him. He just stared, open-mouthed, at Malfoy, who stared right back. (Calvin and Hobbes rules (Jordan), Age 8 to 12, 6/2/2003 9:13:34 PM, KnownSecretOfMagic )

(25) Percy circled around Malfoy like a vulture who had a hunger for answers. "How did you get in?" He said. Malfoy sighed. "I dont know," he muttered. "I was in my house dormitory trying to sleep, but I saw a strange figure next to my bed...then I was on the ground in here!" Percy laughed. "A likely story, Malfoy." Then a voice rang out that said, "I believe him." It was David. Everyone who had crowded around Percy and Malfoy stared at him. There was a long, sustended silence, up until someone said, "Shut-up, muggle." David's eyes almost burst out of his head. It wasn't anyone David even knew! Harry gasped, Hermione bent her head down, and Ron's face went a very deep shade of red. There was another long period of silence, until Ron started breathing heavily. Finally, Ron couldn't stand it anymore. He ran to the kid and started pounding him down to the ground. (Jordan, Age 8 to 12, 6/5/2003 3:22:37 PM, KnownSecretOfMagic )

(26) "Ron!" Hermione cried out. "Don't!" Ron kept on pounding and pounding. "Ron!" Harry yelled. "Snap out of it!" Ron stopped suddenly and stood up. He seemed to be in a daze. "What happened?" he asked. "What hppened! What happened! You practically killed this kid, that's what happened!" Hermione screamed. "Hermione, Ron seems to be, well, not right." Harry said quietly. "We need to get him some help." "That's right. Mental help." Hermione said. But she got up and helped Harry lead Ron to the common room.Ron fell in a deeep sleep. "Ron? Ron? Are you okay?" aksed a faraway voice. Ron rubbed his eyes as the figure came into focus. "Ron! You're all right!" The figure cried out. The figure seemed to be a girl....with frizzy hair..but Ron couldn't remember who it was...he had a creepy feeling that he knew this girl, but he couldn't remember her name...."Ron!" the girl cried again."It's Hermione. Harry has been worried sick about you." Harry, Ron thought, Who's Harry. This name, like the girl had a familiar ring to it, but he still couldn't remember."Who are you?" Ron asked groggily. "Ron, it's not time to play games. David is in trouble. "David? Who's David?" "The kid who you and Harry brought here." "Harry? Who's Harry?" Ron asked, sitting up. Hermione groaned. Why me? Why me? she thought. Why do I have to be stuck with a prank-loving boy who pretends he doesn't know his best friend's name when David is in trouble? Why? Little did Hermione know that Ron really couldn't remember their names. (sophian, Age 8 to 12, 6/19/2003 3:24:49 PM, KnownSecretOfMagic )

(27) The next day, Harry, Hermione, and David went to charms class while Ron was being treated by Madame Pomfrey at the nurse's office (It seemed he had a bad case of amnesia, probably a memory curse). In Proffesor Flitwick's class, they were learning about the history of memory charms. They had learned how to cure memory charms, and how to prevent them. "The first memory charm," Proffesor Flitwick announced. "Was invented in 1691, when-" He was interrupted by a slam of doors, where Snape came in. But it wasn't an evil look he had on his face...it was a worried one. "We have an emergency." he choked. "All proffesors head to Dumbledore's office. All children will follow the prefects to their houses." Everyone ran out the door and scurried to where they were going to go. But David headed elsewhere. He wanted to find out what was going on. He went to Dumbledores office...but he couldn't find a way in. Proffesors were coming his way. He had to hide! (Jordan, Age 8 to 12, 6/19/2003 10:30:27 PM, KnownSecretOfMagic )

(28) he hid behind a statue and watched the teachers come in one by one and say "fizzing whizzbies!" the when the coast was clear David went up to a gargoyle and shouted "fizzing whizzboes!" the gargoyle leaped aside and the door opened and what looked like and golden escelator, was going up. (shimmy, Age 8 to 12, 7/5/2003 3:34:02 PM, KnownSecretOfMagic )

(29) He hid behind a statue and watched the teachers come in one by one and say "fizzing whizzbies!" the when the coast was clear David went up to a gargoyle and shouted "fizzing whizzboes!" the gargoyle leaped aside and the door opened and what looked like and golden escelator, was going up. (shimmy, Age 8 to 12, 7/5/2003 3:34:25 PM, KnownSecretOfMagic )

(30) He hid behind a statue and watched the teachers come in one by one and say "fizzing whizzbies!" the when the coast was clear David went up to a gargoyle and shouted "fizzing whizzboes!" the gargoyle leaped aside and the door opened and what looked like and golden escelator, was going up. (shimmy, Age 8 to 12, 7/5/2003 3:35:08 PM, KnownSecretOfMagic )

(31) Nathan suddenly appeared. His eyes were Bloodshot and he had blood and veins on his face. (nathan, Age 13 to 18, 8/21/2003 6:09:12 PM, KnownSecretOfMagic )

(32) Nathan did not appear at all. He was dead. (Jazzy D, Age 8 to 12, 8/25/2003 3:55:35 PM, KnownSecretOfMagic )

(33) uh Excuse Me Nathan can Bring Himself Back to life but with Ugly results Like the bloodshot Eyes and Veins (Nathan ( Edit my paragraph pleas mak it Nice I'm a Gryffindor), Age 13 to 18, 8/26/2003 6:31:48 PM, KnownSecretOfMagic )

(34) Umm...I'll get sophian to help me later... (Jazzy D, Age 8 to 12, 8/27/2003 12:27:30 PM, KnownSecretOfMagic )

(35) nope. (Sophian, Age 8 to 12, 10/2/2003 5:06:49 PM, KnownSecretOfMagic )

(36) HEY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (A.H. Get'n ready to put my first name, Age 8 to 12, 10/6/2003 5:43:23 PM, KnownSecretOfMagic )

(37) Sophian pleazzzzzzzzzzz!!!!!! Fine dont do it! I'm gone! Laterz yall! =) (Aaron, can you please bug off?-Jasmine , Age 8 to 12, 10/10/2003 4:51:48 PM, KnownSecretOfMagic )

(38) I'm not a bug.I can't buzz either.Last,I can't fly. (AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA, Age 8 to 12, 10/11/2003 10:21:32 AM, KnownSecretOfMagic )

(39) As they talk, Harry turns around to face an alien(from the movie Alien)It grabs Harry Potter and smashes his skull with one finger. Now Harry Potter is dead now. (Alien Jerk, Young Adult, 11/12/2003 9:28:22 AM, KnownSecretOfMagic )

(40) Then the teacher of Hogwarts is starteled by a loud crunch and shackyness. He then sees the titanic just ran into the Hogwarts building killing five million Wizards and morons. Then they renamed Hogwartz Hogbutt! (Harrypotter is dumb, Age 8 to 12, 11/12/2003 9:47:31 AM, KnownSecretOfMagic )

(41) Then ugly butts came and lived in hogbutt (YOU ARE A BUTT BRAIN BECAUSE I SAID SO!, Age 1 to 4, 11/13/2003 4:37:26 PM, KnownSecretOfMagic )

(42) Ignore every post after the only decent one about 2 pages before this. (Jordan (the original writer of this story), Age 8 to 12, 12/20/2003 5:30:59 PM, KnownSecretOfMagic )

(43) This gave David an idea. "Maybe I can find out more about King's Cross if I go at night," he thought. So, one day, David packed up some food, sleeping stuff, and a flashlight and went into a bathroom at the station to wait for King's Cross to close. His sister, Beth, was with him. He had told her about his plan. "The boys bathroom is kind of nice,"said Beth, sitting on top on a toilet. "Oh,"said David, listening. "I think I hear the guard leaving." David and Beth scooted off of their toilets and switched on their flashlights. "I like this place," said David as he looked around at the high ceiling."It is pretty," said Beth. David shined his flashlight around the floor. David saw two circles of light shining at him and held the flashlight steady. "Hi," said David to the cat. Beth looks around and sees the cat and says,"Hi cat." Beth shines her light away and starts looking at the train tracks. "I had a good breakfast this morning," Beth says to David."I ate French toast with syrup." "I had cornbread and a poptart," says David, looking around at the walls. David shines his light at one of barriers. All of the sudden, a brown cat walks out of the barrier. "Meow," it says. "Whoa, cool!" says David as the brown cat walks off to join the other cat. (Katie, Age 13 to 18, 1/3/2004 11:06:05 AM, KnownSecretOfMagic )