Harry Potter...EXPELLED?

(0) "Harry, how could you?" Hermione cried. "You can't leave! You are the best wizard in the world!" Harry standed, looking up at Hermione's window at the HOGWARTS EXPRESS. Tears filled his eyes. He heard a voice behind him saying, "Come to us, boy!" It was the Dursleys. Each of them smiled. Harry obviously dispised when the dursleys smiled at him. When they smiled at him it meant something bad would happen. Harry Potter was to stay with the Dursleys... FOREVER! "Bonehead, wake up!" said Dudley. "I can't sleep! Give me your bed, or I'll pound you!" "That's my boy!" Vernon said at the door. (KJH, Age 13 to 18, 10/9/2002 3:07:53 AM, HarryPotterExpelled)

(1) Harry woke up in a cold sweat. He turned over and saw his alarm clock said 7am. It was Dudleys Birthday today, he suddenly remembered. "Nooooooo...." he thought, today will be sheer hell. The plan was for Dudley, Piers Polkiss, Uncle Vernon and Aunt Petunia to go for a birthday tea. Harry was old enough to be left alone now. He had already planned to look in Aunt Petunias' cupboard that she kept locked, but Harry had recently discovered where she kept the key (Hannah, Age 13 to 18, 10/22/2002 12:54:03 PM, HarryPotterExpelled)

(2) Harry had only seen a similar key when he was trying to rescue to Philosophers Stone, and he knew it had to be magical. Although he wondered whether it was after all because Aunt Petunia and Uncle Vernon would never allow any talk of magic in the house, in fact no one talked to Harry at all (Magical Muggle, Age 8 to 12, 10/22/2002 1:00:13 PM, HarryPotterExpelled)

(3) Harry was determined to be good until they left for their outing so he cooked the usual eggs and bacon for Dudleys Birthday. Dudley, who now had to squeeze to get behind the dining room table, accidentally dropped a bacon rasher on the floor. As he strained to reach it, the back seam of his trousers ripped with a loud tearing sound. Uncle Vernon, who was helping himself to another serving of eggs, whirled around and glared at Harry. "HARRY! GET TO YOUR ROOM NOW!" Vernon then turned to Petunia and said, "Add that to his list of chores for today. That'll keep him out of mischief!" Harry smiled to himself as he hurried up the stairs. (HarryPFan, Age 13 to 18, 10/22/2002 1:04:20 PM, HarryPotterExpelled)

(4) Later that day, despite numerous attempts by Dudley to get Harry into trouble, Piers, Dudley, Vernon and Petunia left to go out for Dudleys birthday tea, amid by promises by Vernon that Dudley could indeed have the biggest steak and ice cream they served. Dudley, satisfied by his fathers' promise, immediately kept quiet, and just shot Harry nasty looks through the window as the car left the drive. (Hannah, Age 13 to 18, 10/22/2002 1:07:10 PM, HarryPotterExpelled)

(5) Harry checked that the car truly was gone and then breathed a deep sigh of relief. He quickly ran to where he knew the key was hidden (under a tea pot on the window sill). As he grabbed the key, he felt a dragging sensation through his stomach. He realised that the key was really a portkey, and soon the swishing sounds indicated that he was being transported to somewhere else. He'd have to wait to find out where..... (Harry Rules!, Age 13 to 18, 10/22/2002 1:10:13 PM, HarryPotterExpelled)

(6) He landed on his back and felt the crunch of fresh grass under his bottom. He turned, disorientated, to try and work out where he was. He then heard a shrill scream, followed by the sound of something (or someone) being hit really hard by a broomstick. He tried to distinguish the voice, but couldnt, due to the wind and rain, lashing against his ears and face. He tried to stand up, and succeeded, and started to walk along a little worn path. (Hannah, Age 13 to 18, 10/22/2002 1:12:44 PM, HarryPotterExpelled)

(7) He realised that he was at 'The Burrows'- Rons' house! He ran into the back parlour to see Mrs Weasley stirring a large cauldron, accompanied by a smaller figure, with big hair. It was Hermione! Harry ran up to her and grabbed her from behind, and she squealed in shock. (Hannah, Age 13 to 18, 10/22/2002 2:14:16 PM, HarryPotterExpelled)

(8) Whats going on? Harry said Mrs.Wesley is going to eat me!said Hermione.Now dear go into the cauldren said mrs.Wesley.They want to eat me just becauce i have a very smart brain said Hermione.NOT! said Hermione.SO WHAT IS SHE DOING!asked Harry. (Bernard Hangston., Age 13 to 18, 10/27/2002 12:46:51 PM, HarryPotterExpelled)

(9) 'Harry',Hermione said,her eyebrows furrowed.'You are not supposed to be here.'I am sure the Dursleys would not want you here during summer vacation'.Just then Ron burst in and yelled'Harry!'.Mrs.Weasley smiled,as they all went to eat.'Mom,can me,Harry,and Hermione go to hogsmeade?',Ron said.'Sure,as long as you bring Ginny with you dear',Mrs.Weasley said,looking at Harry.Just as they were in hogmeade,Harry and Ginny wanted to go to Fleurean Fortesques,after they did most of the things,Hermione suggested that they just sit down.As Hermione was reading,Harry and Ginny started chatting,Ron was curious on were the left side led to.Mrs.Weasley told him,never to go past the wizard headlines,which was a store for newspapers,that witches and wizards used.Unfortunately,the was the last store past the site were Mrs.Weasley said never to go.Ron lifted his head to see anything beyond he place,where he could'nt really make out,but it looked like it opened up to a new magical place.Being the daredevil he is,Ron turned to Harry,Hermione,and Ginny.'Hey guys',Ron said,pointing to the left side.'Oh no',Hermione said.'There is no way i am going there.Nobody's been there since Voldemort's risen.There is no way i am ever going there.Ever.Ron shifted uncomfartably,but Harry always loved adventures and he said,'i have beat Voldemort more than enough already,so there is nothing a small magical forest that can scare me'.'Yeah',Ginny added,not sure.'I'm up'.Harry,Ron and Ginny turned to look at hermione.'Well',Hermione said.'I guess i could go because i don't want you three going up there by yourself,so i will be there to look out'.'So..i am in',Hermione said smugly.'Yes!',harry and Ron shouted.So now they were off to the magical forest,which seemed to spread to a long distance.Suddenly,it was dark and as they walked they lit up their wands. (Winnie, Age 13 to 18, 10/30/2002 4:48:22 PM, HarryPotterExpelled)

(10) harry sat down to breakfast the next morning . (lauren, Age 8 to 12, 10/31/2002 11:08:25 AM, HarryPotterExpelled)

(11) Okay... (Winnie, Age 13 to 18, 11/20/2002 7:39:20 PM, HarryPotterExpelled)

(12) ignore last 2 postings (cerch, Age 8 to 12, 11/22/2002 8:15:55 AM, HarryPotterExpelled)

(13) their wands were begginin 2 not help as it grew darker and they got weaker they were walkin 2 far there was nowhere elso 2 go it was pitch black "uh harry where r we goin",asked ron with a very babish look on his face as if 2 say " i want my mummy (boo, Age 13 to 18, 11/26/2002 3:17:46 PM, HarryPotterExpelled)

(14) BOOM a very fierce storm was starting to develop. (Robert.J.K, Age 8 to 12, 12/1/2002 3:41:50 PM, HarryPotterExpelled)

(15) Lets get otu of here!said Hermione.Hermione grabbed Harry's hand and ran back were Mrs.Weasley was sitting.I want to explore!said Harry.Its too dangerous.said Hermione.We could even get killed over there!said HermioneCan I go!?said Harry.Harry letted go of Hermiones hand.Fine!said Hermione.Can you come with me?.said Harry.No!said Hermione.Ill just go and sit down and read "Hogwarts a history"Volume 7.said Hermione.Well I have the "Hogwarts a history."Volume 8.said Harry.Youre on.said Hermione.Harry and Hermione ran back were Ginny and Ron were.Weres Ron?said Harry.He go token by that storm!said Ginny.Ginny started to cry.Lets go find him!said Hermione.Ginny,Hermione and Harry followed a path wich led to a old little house. (When would you like to kbow?, Age 13 to 18, 12/15/2002 9:00:18 PM, HarryPotterExpelled)

(16) At the foot of the house, they spotted a bell. Tied to it was a feather,which almost seemed t be inviting them in. They all grabbed the feather, each one wanting it for him/herself. Suddenly, a flock of vultures suddenly came and carried them away away. (Book girl, Age 8 to 12, 3/8/2003 11:33:51 AM, HarryPotterExpelled)

(17) "Help" said Ron and Harry at the same Time. (Your friendly neighbor, Age 8 to 12, 3/9/2003 5:42:08 PM, HarryPotterExpelled)

(18) Suddenly. BANG!!! with a sound so loud harry and hermione covered their ears. A Boy Dressed entirley in black appeared. It Was the villionous Nathan Williams of slytherin (nathan williams, Age 13 to 18, 4/10/2003 9:42:45 PM, HarryPotterExpelled)

(19) "I thought I would never have a chance to do this!" said Nathan with a smirk on his face. Then behind him came a person with a back jacket on. All the sudden Harry went cold. He felt like someone sucked the all the fun out of Harry. Yes! It was a dementor. The dementor spoke "Harry Potter. Our last meeting was fun! I loved the way you toke Cedric's body to his parents! Also I loved the way our wands priori incantatem!". Then Harry remembered in his fourth year the triwizard tourament's last task. The cup was a portkay which lead him staight to... ohno... "Yes Harry!" said the cold deep voice" It's me!" The mysteriest man toke of his jacket to show a slimy long body. The man's face looked like a snakes face. Green all over. " Lord Voldemort!"...... (Stephanie Jones, Age 8 to 12, 4/16/2003 7:11:19 AM, HarryPotterExpelled)

(20) What are you doing here?asked Harry.Im here for revenge (casey, Age 8 to 12, 4/24/2003 3:05:31 PM, HarryPotterExpelled)

(21) What are you doing here?asked Harry.Im here for revenge (casey, Age 8 to 12, 4/24/2003 3:05:38 PM, HarryPotterExpelled)

(22) "But why are you here for revenge," said Harry.Are you going to hurt us. "No I'm not," said green face. I just want Harry to come with me. (Carlos, Age 13 to 18, 4/28/2003 9:56:16 AM, HarryPotterExpelled)

(23) So he grabbed Harry and rushed out the door."Where are you taking me!?" said Harry To the Riddles house my Hide-out. So is it true? "Were you really expelled?" said Voldermont, "yes" said Harry. (Patrick, Age 8 to 12, 4/28/2003 10:40:19 AM, HarryPotterExpelled)

(24) I was expelled for being accussed of stealing pictures. Malflorl did it. I will get him back. (corbin, Age 8 to 12, 4/28/2003 11:25:36 AM, HarryPotterExpelled)

(25) "How I will do it I do not know. Hermione could help me. She always knows what to do in these situations. But why have you taken me here?" (Sierra, Age 8 to 12, 4/28/2003 12:34:25 PM, HarryPotterExpelled)

(26) Tonight I'm going to sneek out,there's no way I'm staying with thoses evil people.As for Malforl he will pay, belive me he will pay! I'm going to write Howarts and tell them the truth! (Jonathan , Age 13 to 18, 4/28/2003 12:35:08 PM, HarryPotterExpelled)

(27) I have to have something good, something big. I will have to leave tonight. At about 10:00. He wont be expecting this, shoot, he wont be expecting me at all. This will be very good. I don't get exspelled without revenge. Boy will this be good. This will have to make the top of the list of pranks. I will be known from all the world. Every where I go, people will be greeting me. I will be the most popular boy in the whole wide world. (Allison, Age 8 to 12, 4/28/2003 12:39:52 PM, HarryPotterExpelled)

(28) Hey Sabari FAncy seeing you here Well one night prof Dumbledore was hit by the Hogwarts express and died, YAH HOO! You are going to be exterminated My children are gay mother *********** (Horntail, Parent, 5/1/2003 8:25:18 AM, HarryPotterExpelled)

(29) wait wait wait....let's back up! Harry gazed miserably out of the window as the sounds of Dudley's snores echoed throughout the house. I have to go back to Howgwarts, Harry thought. I can't stand this house and this, Harry looked at the room where Dudley was sleeping, this WHALE sleeping in what is supposed to be my bed.I don't even know why I'm expelled. (stealing pictures would just get him detention) I have to run away. But to where? That was the question. To Ron's? No, he was at school. Hermione? No, she was also at Hogwarts. Hogwarts, Harry thought bitterly. Hogwarts, the only home I ever had. I have to write to Dumbledore. He will understand. (he's NOT dead.) Harry picked up a pen and began scribbling a note to Dumbledore, a note that could be his ticket home. (ihpos*-, Age 8 to 12, 6/3/2003 4:08:43 PM, HarryPotterExpelled)

(30) this can't be, im "harry potter" i am the innocent. I can't crawl and hide away as though all my years hogwarts were a dream.There's one thing to do "get revenge".'Harry','Harry'wake up wake up cried hermione. (Yere , Age 5 to 8, 7/7/2003 9:39:11 AM, HarryPotterExpelled)

(31) I just got to get my revenge! I know what I'll do...... (Friend of ihpo, Age 8 to 12, 7/10/2003 10:09:47 AM, HarryPotterExpelled)

(32) Ohh woops i just blew off my head. (Harry_Killer, Age 8 to 12, 7/19/2003 10:15:11 AM, HarryPotterExpelled)

(33) Harry Noticed Nathan's Eyes were bloodshot. harry grabbed nathan and pulled him away from hermione. the two struggled. harry threw Nathan over the chicken fence. nathan pulled out a knife and went at harry again they struggled over the knife. harry sent the knife flying. Nathan backhanded harry. harry picked up a knife and stabbed nathan. nathan grabbed harry by the throat and said. I'm glad we are together now. our destiny's complete. he died. hermione was still stuck in a porthole. (Nathan w, Age 13 to 18, 8/12/2003 2:20:02 PM, HarryPotterExpelled)

(34) I have a question. Why do you always put a person named Nathan in the story when that person has nothing to do with anything? (sophian, Age 8 to 12, 8/12/2003 4:21:01 PM, HarryPotterExpelled)

(35) because Nathan s a Villain (nathan, Age 13 to 18, 8/24/2003 6:57:57 PM, HarryPotterExpelled)

(36) (Smiles) Maybe we can change that. Let's continue the story and we have to add that Nathan turns good... (Jazzy D, Age 8 to 12, 8/25/2003 7:30:18 AM, HarryPotterExpelled)

(37) Nathan Stood up his eyes still Bloodshot. His Face was Badly Burned and Scratched. Harry Was Trying to help Hermione out of the porthole. Nathan GRabbed Malfoy Who was Aiming a Gun at Harry. They Struggled for a bit Nathan finally threw malfoy overboard. Then suddenly A Look alike of Nathan Came Out With 2 Laser Swords. Nathan Panicked. Harry Abandoned Hermione To Help Nathan. He Remebered That He. Harry owned His very Own Lightsaber. And Nathan Was An Excellent Swordfighter. Better Than Nathan-Clone. (Nathan, Age 13 to 18, 8/25/2003 9:58:13 PM, HarryPotterExpelled)

(38) What is with the lightsabers?! We're not in Star Wars you dim wit! (Jazzy D, Age 8 to 12, 8/26/2003 1:53:43 PM, HarryPotterExpelled)

(39) Nathan-Clone Advanced On nathan. Harry threw Nathan The laser sword. Nathan and nathan clone Fought While harry Helped Hermione. She finally pulled free. They watched nathan Fighting His Clone Atop of Hogwarts. suddenly Nathan Lost his Balence And Nearly Fell but he Grabbed on to the ledge. harry knew He had to Help nathan. he saw a Long Spear. he Picked it up and aimed it At Nathan-Clone (Nathan, Age 13 to 18, 8/26/2003 6:08:10 PM, HarryPotterExpelled)

(40) The spear went straight throught the clone. Harry knew now that the only thing that could kill the clone had to be magic. He took out his wand and shouted "Avada Kedava!" He was shocked to see that the clone fell to the ground and lay dead. Nathan couldn't hold on any longer and he fell... (Jazzy D (I hope you die this time!), Age 8 to 12, 8/27/2003 9:12:55 AM, HarryPotterExpelled)

(41) Nathan suddenly got his hand caught between 2 Branches. HARRY GET UP HERE. HELP ME. He Called. (nathan, Age 13 to 18, 8/27/2003 10:14:27 AM, HarryPotterExpelled)

(42) my Circulation is cut off. Suddenly malfoy Appeared And took out two swords and set them ablaze. Harry Grabbed two other swords form Nathans Belt And set them Ablaze. The flaming Swords Lit up the night. Hermione. said harry Help Nathan while i keep Malfoy busy.then get Professor dumbledore. (Nathan, Age 13 to 18, 8/27/2003 10:25:58 AM, HarryPotterExpelled)

(43) Hermione kicked Nathan out of the tree whilst Harry stabbed Malfoy in the stomach with one of the swords. Malfoy wsa now on fire. Harry watched as the blood that spilled everywhere got caught on fire too. (Jazzy D, Age 8 to 12, 8/27/2003 12:31:12 PM, HarryPotterExpelled)

(44) By the way Nathan, have you seen What Happens When They Grow Up (#2)? I'ver added you as a character. You have to be a bad guy though. (Jazzy D, Age 8 to 12, 8/27/2003 12:34:33 PM, HarryPotterExpelled)

(45) and then harry went to hermonie he told her his real fealings and then he humped her and everyone was there (lalalala, Age 5 to 8, 9/25/2003 3:25:20 PM, HarryPotterExpelled)

(46) Blah blah (Ass Hole, Age 8 to 12, 10/11/2003 10:24:35 AM, HarryPotterExpelled)

(47) Then everyone said they hated hogwarts and destroyed the school and themselves. (Harry Hater, Age 13 to 18, 11/12/2003 9:31:21 AM, HarryPotterExpelled)

(48) Then the Marines came and keeled everyone that was left! (Keel, Age 8 to 12, 11/12/2003 9:39:48 AM, HarryPotterExpelled)

(49) Harry looked at Hogwarts for the last time. This was Harry's last chance to kiss Hermione. He was deeply in love with her. Harry was being... EXPELLED!!! Harry was going because he walked into the forest and managed to lose the Philosipher stone, Gryffindors sword, the feather off a hippogriff, the golden egg and his picture of black. "Bye Harry!" hermione cried and the moment of truth came. They kissed. (Heather , Age 8 to 12, 11/13/2003 11:11:13 AM, HarryPotterExpelled)

(50) i hate this story! (Draco Malfloy, Age 13 to 18, 11/16/2003 7:36:18 PM, HarryPotterExpelled)

(51) whatever draco malfoy but harry & hermione look very good together though so you better get used to it! (maria (a spy kid), Age 8 to 12, 11/22/2003 6:48:56 PM, HarryPotterExpelled)

(52) Ignore pharagraphs 45 to 51 (Hermonies boy, Age 13 to 18, 11/27/2003 9:05:53 PM, HarryPotterExpelled)

(53) Instead :Harry went up to hermonie and was just about to tell her how he really felt about her. But just when he opened his mouth , malfoy threw a pencil at hermonie. she just disappeared . harry picked up a lightsaber and ran twards malfoy , just as harry steped on a floorboard he realized it was a portkey.the last thing he saw was malfoy point his wand at a still flaming sowrd and shout Porteoliss (Hermonies boy, Age 13 to 18, 11/27/2003 9:25:18 PM, HarryPotterExpelled)

(54) he died after harry's life is over!! (chris, Age 13 to 18, 2/6/2004 6:06:21 AM, HarryPotterExpelled)

(55) he died after harry's life is over!! (chris, Age 13 to 18, 2/6/2004 6:06:22 AM, HarryPotterExpelled)

(56) he died after harry's life is over!! (chris, Age 13 to 18, 2/6/2004 6:06:21 AM, HarryPotterExpelled)

(57) "SHUT UP"said Harry. (Bartholomew, Age 8 to 12, 2/11/2004 6:13:37 PM, HarryPotterExpelled)

(58) U IS SO STUPID I WILL KILL AND DESTROY YOU (DAVID, Parent, 3/3/2004 2:57:35 PM, HarryPotterExpelled)

(59) this story sucks who is dieing. (anonomous, Age 1 to 4, 3/22/2004 5:44:28 PM, HarryPotterExpelled)

(60) stupid 4 year olds your nucking futs (me, Age 1 to 4, 3/22/2004 5:45:44 PM, HarryPotterExpelled)

(61) I'm back! (A.H., Age 8 to 12, 3/28/2004 11:36:41 PM, HarryPotterExpelled)