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Kelly: James Potter was sitting in his compartment with his best friends sirius, remus, and peter.He was thinking about lily evans again needless to say he thought he was in love with her and this was his seventh and final year to prove to her that he was not an arrogant toerag like she saw him. Then the compartment opened and lily evans asked,"Can me and jane and kelly sit here our compartment is full?""Of course!"said james before his friends said anything.