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Jen: Harry was going down to the Great Hall for some delicous breakfast. When he got there he could smell bacon,eggs,sausage,toast, and many more. When he went to sit down he saw a beautiful girl go by. She was on her way to class. Harry watched her go by and on her way out she dropped a peice of parchment. Harry took his chance and went for the parchment to give it to her. When he finally caought up with her he said "Is this yours? "Why, yes it is," she said,"I must have dropped it. Thank You," she smiled,"I'm Cho...Cho Chang." "I'm Harry...Harry PPP," he forgot his last name! "Potter?" said Cho "Yes, thats what it is," said Harry embarrassed. Cho giggled. He walked with her all the way out of the Great Hall towards her class and he forgot all about his empty stomach and all the time she was talking he was thinking, She gorgeous.