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lauren: amber granger was nervous . she was amongst the other first years in the great hall . she looked over to the griffindor table and she could see her older sister hermione with her friends ron and harry . finally she heard her name being called and she slowly made her way up towards the sorting hat with a slight fear swimming round her .