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Anais: I yell out his name in pain"Please Ryan don't go stay with me here by my side " he turns around to see me the girl that used to be the girl of his dreams with bruises, casts and a machine injecting medicine into her blood. I feel sorrow in this hospital room I feel his heartache to see me this way.And then all of a sudden I see tears in his eyes. And he looks at me with grief as if I were no longer his lover anymore . Then he walks slowl towards me and with his cold and clamy hands he touches my face gently and kisses my forehead warmly. I hear his warm and low voice whisper to my ear"I'm sorry melody...I don't deserve you" and I watch him walk away as if a funeral and turn back to face me and cry in front of me to see him later walk away.I stay there in my hospital bed hearing the machines beep and pain fill me also with sadness I wanted again to yell out his name just to see him once again.Two day's have gone by and he no longer comes back. Then after that I hear him coming back again but this time it's just a dream saying he is gone .