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Alex: I couldn't move. I hid petrified under my covers. I could hear loud noise from somewhere in my room. Finally I decided to work out what it was, so....I look to see where its coming from.I hear that disgusting sound again....its coming from the closet.I slowly open the closet door and...I see the Devil....TO BE CONTINUED

Chaya: I couldn't move. I hid petrified under my covers. I could hear loud noise from somewhere in my room. Finally I decided to work out what it was, so....