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Laura: One day a girl named Sarah went to buy a new bunny. "Which one do you want Sarah?" asked her father. "All of them." said Sarah. "O.K." said her father. When they got home the bunnys were put in their new cage. It was night by time they got home so Sarah said good night and had to go to bed. Then her mother and father went to bed. But when they woke up in the morning Sarah saw the bunnys out of their cage, and the cage had bite marks inthe bars. The only thing they DIDN'T notice that the dog DID was that the bunnys had red, evil, eyes.