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Ashlee: Cora was in her attc, looking for something to do on a rainy Saturday like this one. 'I should just give up.' Cora thought. "I'll look in that last corner, but thats it!" she said alound. She walked over to the dusty corner and couldn't believe what she saw. It was a huge toy castle, the walls of the castle were really made of stone. Inside she saw a friair. And a kinight. She saw a king, a queen, a prince, and townsfolk. But where was the princess. There was a box next to it, it said that the castle included a princess. She poked her findger into the castle to look for her but she was pulled in.