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Andrew: A boy named Andrew was walking down the street when he ran into a bunch of bullies. "hey you big fat jerk" "im not the big fat jerk you are the the big fat jerk" "your mum is!" (bullies laughing so hard their crying) hey come here and say that!!!!! "ok i will your mum is" smack! trip! bang! Next thing you know he has a broken nose, black eye and a broken knee.