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Neri: A pale, peaky boy was sitting fast asleep next to the window in the last compartment of the Hogwarts Express. He looked ill and exhausted, his light brown hair was flecked with ash blond. A boy with messy black hair peered at him. "Psst, Sirius. Who do you reckon he is?" he whispered to the handsome boy next to him. The boy blinked boredly. "Dunno, but he looks like a good hex could kill him." James leant over and prodded the sleeping boy. "Hey.."