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William: The launch pad is heating up. The people here wait for the moment of a lifetime. With this big of a gas tank, people would pay more than $10,000 to see this. The heat of the suit is scorching him, especially with the added heat of the engines. But, most of all, the nervousness inside of him piles up. Will it work, or will it not? He will be the first to find out. He is going to be the first man on Mars.