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Rachael: Hermione walked the corridors along one Thursday. Harry walked up to Hermione, "Hermione, why wern't you at breakfast?" Ron came running after them, "Hey," He said in a happy sort of voice. "Uhh, Hi" Hermione said in a quiet voice, he could tell she was depressed. Harry had an idea to chear Hermione up. "Hey, Hermione. Wanna go to the libary with us?" Ron tried to protest but Harry gave him a sharp punch in the ribs with his elbow. "No, I don't wanna read, why would I read. I..don't wanna go Harry." She walked away qukly, Harry and ron stopped in their tracks with their mouths hanging open. "Hermione, not want to read?" Ron said in shock. "Whats wrong with Hermione?"