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J.C.A: When Sally Perbov was given the chance to go into outer space, she couldn't decline. She set out in a NASA Space shuttle, with Carl Wavery (a super intellegent, well experianced astronaught). They were cruising nicely through the stars, when they passesd Mars. A forcde ripped open the shuttle and flew into Sally, instantly, they were sucked out into outer space, but they were still breathing. A Psionic Phoenix Raptor had engulfed them...