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carolyn: Hermione screamed as someone grabbed her from behind and clamped a hand over her mouth. "Help!" she shrieked, her voice muffled. No one can hear me, she thought suddenly, but still tried to fight the captor and screamed as loud as she could.. Meanwhile, Ron and Harry heard frantic noises coming from the halls. "Hermione!" they said at once. The two boys rushed to the place where they heard her scream, and found a badge that read, "Slytherin"....