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Alexander: At school in his 6th year Harry Potter after Harry had come to school Domblodor gave an anouncement, "This is the year were we get a student from a nother school will come to or school. We have chosen a student from America to join us. I want you to make a go first impresson and be kind to him." A few people giggled. " Welcome Alexander Williams from the Magastrian School of Magic." Curtains draw Alexander Williams steps forword. A few girls wisper "He's hot." "He is bloody cool" say's Ron." I don't see whats so good about him." said Hermione