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Adam Wright: Harry, Ron, and Hermione, were on their way to the Great Hall, when a huge ugly spider crash through the front door, and were about to step on Hermione with one of it legs. Harry push Hermione to the ground, and he landed on top of her, they stared at one another for a sec, they both went pink in the face, then they remember there were a huge spider in the place, so they quickly got to their feet, and saw that the spider were going after Ron. Hermione aim her wand and fired a Flipendo Knockback Jinx at it, but that only anger the spider to the point that it went after them again, but before it could do anything, the spider bursted into flames. Then the three saw a eleven year old Gryffindor student, who had short blond hair and blue eyes. Hermione smiled at him and hugged him, Harry and Ron looked puzzled, Harry asked, "What are you doing Hermione?" Hermione let go of the boy and faced them, and she said, "This is Drake, I live next door to him." And may I say you look more beautiful now, than you did then," said Drake. He took her hand and kissed it, Hermione giggled, and Ron rolled his eyes. |
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