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Ashleigh: He stared at me as I ran up to Uncle Joe's house.I was happy to be away from his awful stench.I knocked on the door and a old lady answered the door.She said she was my grandmother but her smile just wasn't like grandma's smile in all the photographs.Something was suspicous about her.