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Sali Hicra: "Carmen! GET UP!"
Por favor, you think miserably. You wish, for the thousandth time, that the dream would last forever, or better yet, would become reality...But your mother has resolved herself of that place. And, though you never tell yourself it, it was your fault. Why did you let her catch you hindering the lumberjacks with your magic? Why??! Suddenly, you made a resolution. You're going back. Back to your real home, and as soon as you can.
The weeks passed, as you prepared, as you saved you allowance, and so on. Finally, one friday morning, with your music case filled with various necissaties (some more sandwiches beyond what was in your lunch box, a few cookies, a flashlight, rope, some clothing, matches, etc.) You slip off the bus at the wrong stop, which is near the train station, which you walk to. You buy a ticket, along with several snacks and a pamphlet on giant redwoods, and...You're off! |
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