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Brianna: "But... Your eyes....." I hollered. I felt dead already."My eyes always do that." I felt saved when she said that. "Although..." Oh, here comes the bad stuff. "Dark spirits encounter this world...." Dark spirits? I knew this place was peculiar. "But this world... It's like a non stopping box.