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STORY TITLE:	harrypotterandthedefettionofthehexgirls
NEW PARAGRAPH:	The room filled with sorrow. Everyone cried and cried until the room was completely wet. ''That couldn't have happened...'' Malfoy joined in with: ''I know it's so sad but we have someone to replace him!'' The whole room became silent. ''The person replacing him is great he's really awesome!''Malfoy continued. Then the whole room started talking. Hermoine said to Harry and Ron:''If Malfoy is bringing someone in to replace that guy the replacement will probably be quite horrible.'' Harry and Ron nodded their heads in agreement. ''You're right Hermoine.'', said Harry ''you're right...''
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PREVIOUS PARAGRAPH:	sophia: The room filled with sorrow. Everyone cried and cried until the room was completely wet. ''That couldn't have happened...'' Malfoy joined in with: ''I know it's so sad but we have someone to replace him!'' The whole room became silent. ''The person replacing him is great he's really awesome!''Malfoy continued. Then the whole room started talking. Hermoine said to Harry and Ron:''If Malfoy is bringing someone in to replace that guy the replacement will probably be quite horrible.'' Harry and Ron nodded their heads in agreement. ''You're right Hermoine.'', said Harry ''you're right...'' sophia: The room filled with sorrow. Everyone cried and cried until the room was completely wet. ''That couldn't have happened...'' Malfoy joined in with: ''I know it's so sad but we have someone to replace him!'' The whole room became silent. ''The person replacing him is great he's really awesome!''Malfoy continued. Then the whole room started talking. Hermoine said to Harry and Ron:''If Malfoy is bringing someone in to replace that guy the replacement will probably be quite horrible. Harry and Ron nodded their heads in agreement. ''You're right Hermoine.'', said Harry ''you're right...'' sophia: The room filled with sorrow. Everyone cried and cried until the room was completely wet. ''That couldn't have happened...'' Malfoy joined in with: ''I know it's so sad but we have someone to replace him!'' The whole room was still silent. ''The person replacing him is great he's really awesome!''Malfoy continued. Then the whole room started talking. Hermoine said to Harry and Ron:''If Malfoy is bringing someone in to replace that guy the replacement will probably be quite horrible. Harry and Ron nodded their heads in agreement. ''You're right Hermoine.'', said Harry ''you're right...'' sophia: The room filled with sorrow. Everyone cried and cried until the room was completely wet. ''That couldn't have happened...'' Malfoy joined in with: ''I know it's so sad but we have someone to replace him!'' The whole room was still silent. ''The person replacing him is great he's really kind.''Malfoy continued. Then the whole room started talking. Hermoine said to Harry and Ron:''If Malfoy is bringing someone in to replace that guy the replacement will probably be quite horrible. Harry and Ron nodded their heads in agreement. ''You're right Hermoine.'', said Harry ''you're right...''

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