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Freya: Kristy was very very angry but Charity was not, when she heard the knews her jaw just dropped.It stayed there for what seemed like ages then her father gently placed his hand under her jaw and closed it."dad why didnt mum tell us sooner what was she scared about...imean she could have told us theres nothing wrong with us having a broher ......is there\?" Charity asked curiously.Tears slowly slipped from her cute eyes.