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maggie: " okay listen girls i have been wanting to tell you this for a long time it might not be so great but here it gose okay! you have a brother" then Lilly bolted out the door trying to avoid the moment. Kristy was in total shock she was very angry that she wasnet told sooner" argghhhh I'm so angry" she slammed her bedroom door.