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*M&Mdoublebubble: Daywalker!". And thrusts went down sword in front of him and stabed at the vampire.

*M&Mdoublebubble: Daywalker leaps to his feet and pulls out a emerald & diamond rocky sword given it to him by the Mandarinian Queen when he slayed several vampires and yells "AAAAARRRRRRRIIIIIIIIIIOOOOOOEEEEEEEEEEEEEuyoUBOOOOOOOOOYOOOOOOOWWW!". And thrusts went down sword in front of him and stabed at the vampire.

*M&Mdoublebubble: Daywalker leaps 2 his feet and a pulls out an emerald&diamond studded sword ( given 2 him by the Mandarinian Queen when he slayed several vampires) and yells , "AAAAARRRRRRRIIIIIIIIIIOOOOOOEEEE- EEEEEEEEEuyoUBOOOOOOOOOYOOOOOOOWWW! &thrusts da sword in front of him and sharges at the vampire - !!
 
 
 
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