Brianna: you should make it crative so people wold like it so people would read it .

Hanzzi: Then a boy called donut, jumped out and rescued her. "Are you okay?" he asked. "Yes", said Alana, "lets go to the pizza parlor..."

Hanzzi: Then a boy called donut, jumped out and rescued her. Are you okay? he asked. yes, said Alana. lets go to the pizza parlor...