limabean: About an hour later, Sally started to look pale and she could hardly stand up everytime she tried to walk. Carl began to get worried about her; he knew that she could pass out at any moment and he needed to think off a way to get back to Earth and give Sally her medication. Just then he heard a thud. He turned around and saw Sally laying face down on the floor. She had passed out again. Carl knelt beside her and picked her up. She was all floppy and her eyes where shut plus the colour had gone from her face; it was as white as snow. "This is all my fault, if only I brought the medicine then she wouldn't be in this mess," he sighed to himself. Poor Sally was very sick and she seemed to be getting worse by the minute. Just then, Carl heard a noise from behind him that made him jump. He turned around and saw Sally having a fit.

Lauren: About an hour later Sally started to look pale and she could hardly stand up everytime she tried to walk. Carl began to get worried about her,he knew that she could pass out at any moment and he needed to think off a way to get back to Earth and give Sally her medication. Just then he heard a thud. He turned round and saw Sally laying face down on the floor. She had passed out again. Carl knelt beside her and picked her up. She was all floppy and her eyes where shut plus the colour had gone from her face,it was white as snow. "This is all my fault,if only i bought the medicine then she wouldn't be in the mess" he sighed to himself. Poor Sally was very sick and she seemed to be getting worser by the minute. Just then Carl heard a noise from behind him that made him jump. He turned round and saw Sally having a fit.