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lauren: Rachel began to feel funny and ginny noticed she was going a funny colour colour. "What's wrong rachel?" ginny asked her looking confused and worried. Rachel tried to catch her breath but it was hard but she managed to talk "i-i-i i'm allergic to cats" and with that moment she collasped on the floor unconcious. Mrs norris then ran off and ginny knew who would be coming here now that mrs norris had run off and everyone knew what happens when mrs norris sees students either out of bed or causing trouble she'll look at you then run off.