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lauren: The first year was called rachel and she didn't like wondering around the castle alone and she had made friends with ginny when ginny offered to look after her. "I am glad i've you as a friend ginny" said rachel. Ginny smiled at her and said " well i'm glad to be looking after you. So tell me why don't you like going around the castle by yourself". Rachel went red and couldn't find the words. Ginny looked at her then said " come on rachel you can tell me". After a while rachel told her . " It's creepy in some parts. The stair cases moving, the pictures talking and moving. Oh yeah the ghost's floating past. It's really creepy here." Ginny forced herself a smile before saying to her " you'll get used to it here. I found it a bit creepy when i first started espically when pupils were being attacked". Rachel seemed to be interested in what ginny had said " the pupils were getting attacked?" . Ginny nodded then said " not all of them. It was only the muggle-borns who were getting attacked." Rachel let out a gasp. "What was attacking them?" she asked in deep interest. "It was a giant snake" explained ginny. Rachel let out a sqeal then asked ginny " how do you know?". Ginny explained to her " because i was kidnapped by it". Rachel began to take more interest. " Why did it kidnap you?" . Ginny's smiled faded away then she said " erm i don't want to talk about. Come on let's go" and they began walking when mrs norris appeared out of nowhere.