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My bedroom was the only place where I could relax in peace. But still, it's not always peace. Sometimes it's my mum and Jorge arguing, and sometimes it's my annoying baby brother making stupid aeroplane noises. It is hectic! The only person who knows how I feel is my BFF Angelica, who has the same hectic lifestlye as me. She comes round nearly every day, and tonight she is sleeping over (at 7:00). Oh, it's nearly 7:00, better get thngs ready! Bye
Ashley age 13: My bedroom was the only place where I could relax in peace. But still, it's not always peace. Sometimes it's my mum and dad arguing, and sometimes it's my annoying baby brother making stupid aeroplane noises. It is hectic! The only person who knows how I feel is my BFF Angelica, who has the same hectic lifestlye as me. She comes round nearly every day, and tonight she is sleeping over (at 7:00). Oh, it's nearly 7:00, better get thngs ready! Bye
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SID: 1876
DATE: 10.06.2026 18:54:24
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